Reviews for Harry Potter and the Curse of the Damned
Sheelf21 chapter 5 . 9/11/2021
And now you beat him up and throw him out without Dobby showing up to protect him? And you give them a quick and painless death with the Avada Kedavra? I definitely didn't like these last two chapters, I found them full of errors. Still, the story is very good, no one is perfect and you don't make any mistakes. Even JKR herself made a few.
Sheelf21 chapter 4 . 9/11/2021
Where were the Order members and Bill during Uncle Vernon's attack? If it were for the soundproofing spell, his uncle wouldn't have heard him screaming, so that's no excuse. He could have killed him and no one would have done anything to stop him. That on top of that he was allowed to take money from Harry, I think that's just awful.
I love your writing, and I hope you fix that in what follows, because you don't usually make such big mistakes.
DaniPotterStarSeeker chapter 33 . 7/8/2021
16 years late coming to this, but I heavily enjoyed this duology! I loved all of the interactions between Harry and the Weasleys, and I believe you characterized them extremely well! Loved it!
Guest chapter 26 . 6/2/2021
I really enjoyed this chapter. But mcgonnogal being Dumbledores lover was too much.
Guest chapter 30 . 3/20/2021
I definitly love this chapter! Keep writing!
Guest chapter 29 . 3/20/2021
Guest chapter 18 . 3/19/2021
When Ginny calls him 'luv' can you please spell it properly like,"love?"
Guest chapter 17 . 3/19/2021
Why Ginny!
Guest chapter 16 . 3/19/2021
Seriously? Having Harry yell the dark lord's name wasn't that smart. At all. And of course there are gasps and shrieks, but in the fifth book they already learn how to. And yelling in front of a teacher? Reckless. His style. And usually the trio work together, and Hermione helps him teach. Not maing to nitpick but everything else was wonderful!
Guest chapter 15 . 3/19/2021
It is so Rons fault! I mean dont try and control your girlfriends career, have a life of your own!
Guest chapter 13 . 3/19/2021
I already read it and its not lupin its dumbledore. Sorry for the spoiler!
Guest chapter 8 . 3/18/2021
Um, there are some kids reading... Tone it down a bit please..
Guest chapter 5 . 3/18/2021
I cant believe the dursleys are gone. In one chapter. This is more than they deserve..
Rachael Lockie chapter 1 . 12/27/2020
Another wonderful fic that I’ve just gotten around to reading. Very amusing how many little things you got right! Ginny writing, Weasley death, Dumbledore death, Harry wanting Albus as a child name (thank god it was veto-Ed here!), Harry riding a dragon...
thanks so much!
Guest chapter 33 . 12/25/2020
Great pair of stories. Only thing missing was Harry being an animangus.
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