Reviews for Robocop FanFiction Saga: Episode 1 Gathering Storm
Swashbucklist chapter 1 . 3/31/2013
Riddle with errors, even a misplaced line bar near the end, but it's still a worthwhile read. A good story and action balanced with plot. It's only a decent fanfic, but still probably the best Robocop fanfiction out there. I look forward to finishing this storyline.
DragonPeaceEnvoy chapter 1 . 12/16/2004
"Gathering Storm": I liked several elements in the story, including the way that you emphasized the mysterious, and very sinister "Xui" character; he even seems to speaks in code over the telephone! Well done, although you still need to proofread your work a bit for some spelling, typos, and... I can tell you the rest by e-mail if you would please ask me in an e-mail. I liked overall action and plot-twists, as to what happens during the two-month interim between Murphy/RoboCop's visiting Lewis right after the end of the first movie, and what will happen in the next episode. Tension rises, as cops get ambushed by the new thugs that were led by some forces unknown; very good story, well worth working on.