|Reviews for Crevasse|
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/31
Sasuke the loser traitor doesnt deserve love or know the meaning of it! So love between him and that slutty whore girl slutura would never go through death! Go fuck yourself you boring fuck!
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/1/2013
Omg with the fruit and all. Crazeeh
| Joanne202 chapter 1 . 1/27/2013
Sad... but I love it! 3
| green apple chapter 1 . 7/29/2012
woah. can't imagine the story ended like that. prolong the pain of sasuke. he so deserve it
| xBloomingBlossom chapter 1 . 3/4/2012
This story...literally made me cry. It was amazing! *adds it to my faves* I hope to read more stories by you! :3
| Saddness chapter 1 . 5/30/2011
You leave me without words.
Damn I love it so much,you're a genial writer,thank u for a so sad and lovely story.I don't know why,but I love so much deathfics on SasuSaku theme.
p.s:Sorry for my english)
| Tukiko K chapter 1 . 11/14/2010
| the TumTum tree chapter 1 . 10/31/2010
This is creepy and lovely and very sad. Really well written too.
| haliz chapter 1 . 4/8/2009
not creepy...just beautiful absolutely beautiful it made me cry
| Whats Mine Is Yours chapter 1 . 11/24/2008
that was very creepy! and scary! and depressing! poor naruto,,...poor sasuke
i loved it though~! :'(
| yenyenyen chapter 1 . 8/21/2008
It's so creepily beautiful it leaves me with a cold feeling on the inside, it makes me shudder a little. But it was really good, eerily beautiful.
| diet coffee chapter 1 . 8/17/2007
Amazing yet eerily beautiful. Good job!
| Alaynna chapter 1 . 6/7/2007
Beautiful. *sniff* I love reading fics like this...great work.
| Purple Mistress chapter 1 . 4/27/2007
A great story, but a sad one. Hey I read your profile about the OOC problem, I had read almost all of your story and didn't found anyone OOC, Sasuke is hard character to make him show his love toward Sakura. As a writer I will give you a tip:
1)Never give up. Write because you like to write and remember it is your story and your way, you will hear negative critics from them you will learn but don't let it get to you. Keep writting. (Don't worry to much about grammar, if you did your best you are okay everybody gets grammar errors)
2)I'm a Sasu/Saku writer and I know how you fell about the OOC problem,this is a tip that may help you try to make Sasuke talk less and that think more. He show his emotions by actions or thoughts.
3)Have patients and love your own work, nobody can write like you and be proud of your story not matter what other think.
I know that you haven't asked for this advice, but I can't stand to watch that a good writer stop writting. So get your keyboard and start writting. _
P.S. I know this, because it happened to me. You can check out my story it is about Sasu/Saku and Hina/Naru.
| acreanna chapter 1 . 2/16/2007
it's so pretty and sad!
and i still am...
it's so good!
i loved it.