Reviews for To the Underverse and Back
AmeliaScottLover chapter 1 . 5/8/2008
i luv that quote...

"you keep what you kill"

PandylBas chapter 3 . 6/8/2007
continue on
mjpan-7 chapter 3 . 3/30/2005
Very Original! I loved it. Please write more.
Animagious-White-Tiger chapter 3 . 3/3/2005
I like it so far. I assume that you are going to have Riddick find Kyra because of the title, so probably about six months into the journey he finds her, sabitosh from Toombs, conspiricies from Dame Vakko and Vakko. That was just a basic list of what you might want to put in the story, but always add in something that no one would expect, you want to keep the readers guessing.
Animagious-White-Tiger chapter 1 . 3/1/2005
It is OK for now, I just hope it gets better.
crysalis blue chapter 1 . 2/10/2005
honestly, you should really leave the author's notes out of the body of the story. it takes the reader's attention away from the story. otherwise, it's pretty good.
Gothic Fairy Kytana chapter 1 . 2/6/2005
xXxswiggsterxXx chapter 3 . 1/22/2005
write more, there are so many secrets in this story... it really keeps you wondering, anyway update asap
RiddicksFoxyLady chapter 3 . 1/20/2005
This is interesting update and I wil read!
shelby chapter 3 . 1/16/2005
WOW! you are doin such a great job! I think your story, to the underverse and back, is great-UPDATE SOON PLS!

Neko-Yuff16 chapter 3 . 1/8/2005
heh...great story! _ i take it you hated the original ending as much as i did...guess names amanda...seriously..._ i saw your penname, and freaked..._ update soon! _ ttyl! buh bye! _
Admiral Moineau chapter 3 . 1/6/2005
good story. i thought u made riddick a bit too hesitant, but its all good. plz update soon!
Riddick's girl chapter 3 . 12/27/2004
please update
clove.cigarettes chapter 3 . 12/25/2004
great story

i think riddick and kyra aka jack

should be together

i think it was just ment to be

write more soon i love it!
TheMoosey chapter 3 . 12/22/2004
Brilliant just beautifully brilliant!

yeah you spelled both names right (necromongers and necropolis)

hurry up with the damn next chapter!

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