|Reviews for Falling For You|
| XxCherriesandChocolatexX chapter 2 . 1/11
That was one of the funniest things I have ever read in my life, Brock is a total idiot but we all love him anyway. Awesome job with the story! :)
| Misty Blue chapter 2 . 11/9/2012
Oh, pick up lines work . . . most of the time? Haha! Oh, Ash, Misty... why couldn't this happen already now? But hey, fics like this somewhat make that dream come true.
Brock, be careful what you wish for . . . you've now learned that the hard way... :)
Super funny, cute, sweet, awesome AAML piece! Totally love it.
| pokegrl123 chapter 2 . 6/12/2011
Wow! That was Awesome!1 But it feels like i read something about this b4. At the end of the chapter...
| pokegrl123 chapter 1 . 6/12/2011
fairly good so far.
| anny bo bannie chapter 2 . 6/1/2011
| Neon-Night-Light chapter 2 . 2/12/2011
Amazing story, and has actual attention to detail! Great job.
| Crap Mester Time chapter 2 . 8/27/2010
| NoelMistyAlyssa chapter 2 . 5/10/2010
Your story is romantic and funny good job!
| john r p chapter 2 . 4/6/2010
i loved the ending of the story very nice but it seemed too sudden for me. i feel that the romance ended just when the going was getting good. but still a good story nonetheless. a good place to end it but still open for an epilogue to tell the readers what happened afterwards in their relationship.
good work _
| john r p chapter 1 . 4/6/2010
i loved the first pick up line that brock used
"did you get pulled over by officer jenny? because you've got fine written all over you". loved it
i might actually use that lol
| Pokemonlover chapter 2 . 9/21/2009
Hey, don't worry, the length of this chapter was fine. You know, a good plot always beats a long length. I have to go read more Pokemon stories, I like this Pokeshipping community, it's right up my alley.
| Pokemonlover chapter 1 . 9/21/2009
Hey, for starters, you were looking to make a good "romantic comedy" and made one. This was humorous, though the comedy kind fell on Brock, it was good like that. Brock, I find him good. Well, just for the sake of argument, Brock is in a sad dramtic movie. His part would have to be the comic relief. I liked your pickup lines for him, and hey, good story... Or at least good start to story! All right, time to read chapter 2! Don't worry, I'll review right away when I'm done!
| Modul chapter 2 . 6/27/2009
Brock is the man! He's such a good friend haha.
| Aiselne Phoenix Nocturnus chapter 2 . 6/4/2009
(Overall review) Boy, this story was cute! I liked how as Ash and Misty realize they like each other, Brock becomes even more desperate (than usual) for a girl. Brock’s antics really brought a smile to my face in this fanfic. The poor guy practically undergoes Murphy’s Law with every attempt he makes to get a girlfriend. The scenes when Brock reads Misty's "what kind of a girl are you?" magazine, not to mention Big Bertha's cameo, were priceless!). You should write a “series of unfortunate events” for old Brocko. The Pokeshipping was not too shabby (quite cute), though I think Brock won me over in this story. Still, good job.
| lovedovepup chapter 2 . 5/7/2009