|Reviews for Three Protoforms: Delineating Answers|
| Shadow182 chapter 1 . 4/15/2008
Great- I'm really looking forward to you continuing this one! You could use some sort of indication (a line break, perhaps) each time you go from scene to scene, it can get a little confusing. Other than that, a very enjoyable read.
| ShadowDrygan04 chapter 1 . 10/21/2005
dinobots sister wow i can't wait for the next chapter please write it soon please ;_;