Reviews for Vexation of Spirit |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Superb story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Soft, beautiful, and melancholy. I love this- you show a side rarely seen, in canon or fandom, of the Malfoy's and Blacks. The human side, the innocent child Draco saying "Mummy, you are the prettiest lady in the world", of the love Narcissa did hold for her family, of a publicly cold matriarch softly playing piano as her husband lovingly accompanies his angel on his violin. Kingsley's understanding is the perfect foil to Narcissa's grief, as she slowly makes him lose control, as she tries to make him understand. She searched only for understanding, not necessarily for a pardon, and I think that's what made her words so powerful. It ends beautifully as well, with a rare understanding between two contrary people, and a quote which ties the story together so well. 10/10 Stars |
![]() ![]() ![]() that was awesome. I have no words. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow... that's beautiful. And the quote at the end is a favorite of mine... just gorgeous writing. ~Cendrillo |
![]() ![]() ![]() Whoa...that was very, very beautiful. |
![]() ![]() ![]() One word: Amazing. There is nothing about this fic what I dont like, you've done an excellent job. Unusual, which is probably why I like it. You captured Narcissa's emotions superbly. Bravo! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very interesting, original and different. Good job. :) |