Reviews for Picture A Pirate
Guest chapter 5 . 8/16/2012
Chap 5 sucks. Come on, could you get any more cliché? A demo duel? Yeah right, u just wanted you write (poorly) about a gunfight, though the 'gunfight' was almost as pathetic as ur attempt to describe it. I think the plot overall is alright but can u try to put more effort into giving reasons for a gunfight or something?
ILearnedItFromThePizzaMan chapter 6 . 7/4/2012
Ok i love the way jack acted to do a bit of pick pocketing
deanine chapter 8 . 5/11/2012
Odd and somewhat pointless. o.o
ixluvxprinny chapter 8 . 4/29/2012
... what about all the stuff Harry and Jake stole from the castle's occupants?
nighttheraven2lazy2login chapter 1 . 4/9/2012
Why such a complex name? X) the pirates said they were horrid at naming places, and that seems like you put a dimes thought into it
VeroSev chapter 8 . 3/24/2012
I liked very much this pirate Harry and see a Jack act like a loving father XD... very good story!
My Solitude chapter 8 . 2/19/2012
Wow! Awesome ending. X3
arwin-urban chapter 8 . 1/17/2012
That was a good story! I liked it however I think you missed someone important what about Jacks Dad don't you think Harry wants to meet his grandfather. That would have been halarious!
Arkham Inmate 1473 chapter 8 . 1/3/2012
This story was absolutly fantastic. Hope you write more cross overs with harry potter and pirates of the carabiane.
Dashusi4ka chapter 8 . 12/26/2011
ne, how about a series? I just see Harry in Rurouni Kenshin, Trigun... *drools*
amb chapter 8 . 12/6/2011
ahhhhhhhh happy ending
Serpent91 chapter 8 . 11/2/2011
well written!
akan chapter 8 . 10/14/2011
la traduction automatique de l'argot est difficile a lire.
Isangtao chapter 8 . 10/11/2011
I don't know how you managed to get the incredibly brutal accent right, but I respect you for that.

Was it really a good idea to give Harry an unlimited ammo gun?

Thank you for an interesting read.
Melodien chapter 8 . 10/2/2011
thanks for sharing _
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