|Reviews for Loyalty|
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/8
| GandhiTwerkin4Sushi chapter 1 . 5/19/2013
This is a great story and one of my favorite movies.
| Masako Moonshade chapter 1 . 5/13/2008
That last line struck me. A number of them did, actually. Your descriptions are wonderful, nostalgic, and sweet... but you say much more between the descriptions.
"It is the waiting that gives him life."
That's a powerful line right there.
| Winterbirdie chapter 1 . 10/23/2007
very well done, but compared to the powerful movie, this did fall short. I don't mean that as a critiscm! keep writing! i liked your descriptions and use of words, just comparing that to the movie is impossible. )
| Kalli0pesMus3 chapter 1 . 1/22/2005
Your work is very moving. You are very talented. I really loved 'Life Is Beautiful.' I should write a longer, more helpful review but I just don't know what to say to improve. - Sarika
| Henry Plantagenet chapter 1 . 11/29/2004
A powerful portrait of a lonely person - reminds me of "Eleanor Rigby" and of Paul Simon's "A most Peculiar Man" - "he lived all alone, within a house, within a room, within himself..."