Reviews for The Christening
cherrichik chapter 1 . 10/21/2005
aw! poor queenie...
Dark Gotham chapter 1 . 11/25/2004
Oh, wow this is very good! I am really impressed. You where able to tell a simple but lovely story in a poem. Very nice.
Ben Alexander chapter 1 . 11/25/2004
Pretty great so far! I think that if you continue, maybe you should tell ALL OF IT as a poem! I LOVE great epic poems, and you're off to a pretty good start!
Backroads chapter 1 . 11/25/2004
Wow! I love it! And I think you should continue it, very much so. I don't like sad endings.
TrudiRose chapter 1 . 11/25/2004
This is well-written, but personally I think it works well as a one-shot. It doesn't seem like something that requires continuation, IMO. But it's up to you. (Also, two tiny things: Why would the crowd "sob" at the sight of the baby princess before anything bad has happened? And the word is "virtuous," not "virtuest.")