|Reviews for Clouded Sky|
| Nod-Flareon chapter 2 . 11/30/2004
This is another good one. I still have trouble with the names but i like the way you have set that history out. Please keep this up,
Please read my story. Empyrrean Isles.
| WindieDragon chapter 1 . 11/29/2004
Hi it's me, the_dragon_girl26. Wow, great story. (I also liked "The Ninetales' Curse".) I love the new Pokemon you made up. Maybe I should try to draw them. *looks for copy paper* Oh never mind the paper now... ONTO CHAPTER 2! *starts reading*
| VulpixTrainer chapter 2 . 11/29/2004
you have once agian just keep raising the bar. it feels like you have this all maped out and such. i will keep reading and reviewing, the history part, just amazing and how this is somewhat connected to the past and such. i am now waiting for your next chapter
also Yay fanfic is fixed so no more bugs also thanx for you help for chapter 3 it's fix and ready to be posted
| Act chapter 2 . 11/28/2004
Intriguing. I have a thing for Murkrow. It's quite odd, since I don't really like them in the game. Yet whenever I see one in a fic it almost immediately goes to my "likable characters" list. It's odd. Oh well. Power to Jinx.
Anyway... hm. Not much to say. I do sorta feel forry for Jinx. How'll he feel when Tobias denies that he was his starter?
I'll shut up about Murkrow now...
| Autumnx chapter 2 . 11/28/2004
Wow... Murkrow... Eevil buggers!
Ooh, well, anyway this was an interesting chapter! I see great troubles for Tobias Talltree in the very near future.
| Keleri chapter 2 . 11/28/2004
A murkrow, eh? Hmm. Anyway, looks pretty good so far. _
| Autumnx chapter 1 . 11/27/2004
3 Wow, very interesting first chapter! I say, your idea for creating new pokemon and a new land is simply unique! It is also very interesting how you describe how the Waytar's are, and how you have to be 'chosen' to become a guide. Well done, on this chapter!
| Act chapter 1 . 11/27/2004
Very good _ I never got myself around to reading your other fic, though I really wanted to (I swear). I'm enjoying this, and if my mom wasn't screaming at me because she's trying to watch a movie and my typing is somehow disturbing her, I'd go ito more detail. Later...
| PNEK MEKS chapter 1 . 11/27/2004
WHAT? What kind of ending is that! I want to know what his pokemon is! Damn you and your lousy cliffhangers that keep me begging for more! Wow, I love the way this is set up...guides...and cylinders, and other stuff! SO COOL! Write more! Or I will hunt you down and kill you!
| WildTotodile chapter 1 . 11/27/2004
What Pokemon did Tobias get!