Reviews for Outside
dancing elf chapter 8 . 5/28/2011
very interesting
AnimeKeepsMeSane chapter 8 . 8/1/2010
i read this on DA and it is aaaaaaamazing! so im faving and subscribing to it on here, k? that way i know when it updates!
BloodyPoisonKiss chapter 8 . 4/2/2009
LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT! U ROCK u know that? I love this pairing! I read It on DA first!
Sarriya chapter 8 . 3/15/2009
AW...THEY KISSED-FOR REALLY THIS TIME! LOLZ, THEY ARE SO CUTE! I LOVE THEIR RELATIONSHIP! CAPSLOCK CANNOT FULLY EXPRESS MY FANGIRLY JOY!

anyway nice job! please write more soon!
Angellbaby chapter 8 . 10/17/2008
Wow...Just wow...No other comment.
CoCoBookmark chapter 7 . 7/20/2008
this is amazing! unlike most fanfiction i read about this couple you kept them in charecter the whole time!

sometimes i'll read one and shout at the laptop

"NO! SETO KIBA DOES NOT BLUSH LIKE THAT! HIT FACE MY OCCATIONALY TINT PINK BUT HE IS NOT YUUGI MOTO AND HE DOES NOT BLUSH LIKE A SCHOOL GIRL!"

or

"Joey would not submit to seto kiba like that!, he needs to put up a fight for at least three chapters before you have them making out!"

but this! when i was reding it I thought to myself "yes! seto kiba would act like that, and that is exact,y how joey would react!"

you did a smashing job!

jolly good show

and what not and such witch...

lots of love

CoCoBookmar x
Dionaea Canis chapter 7 . 2/3/2008
Oh, this is such a good story! x3 I'm happy to have found one that doesn't make them instantly in love and everything And Kaiba is still acting mostly like himself, too (you can't ever make him completely himself in yaoi fanfics, really x3;)! I love all those suspensful moment things (I don't know what to call them ;), like in chapter five, with the whole "you like me" thing x3 That was awesome! Great story so far, and even though it's been like three years since you last updated, I hope you continue! D
a girl who secretly loves yaoi chapter 7 . 2/10/2007
i was on and wow love your story. you rock! keep it up na dplus im lo0vin gthose dog remarks... cant wait for next chapter XD
S'Star chapter 7 . 3/19/2006
Please write more.
WOLF3x6 chapter 7 . 1/24/2006
I love this story! Add more chapters! Pretty please, with sugar on top! Pretty please!
Mira-chan chapter 7 . 12/29/2005
Keito, that was such a good story, i luv it.

ne, when are you gonna update the next chapter? i wanna read the next chap, hope you're not slacking off someone now ok hehe LOL

Keep up the good work! _
Izzima chapter 7 . 11/16/2005
this is good! and we promise to throw more varied veggies!

keep going and please send me a muse or a challenge, i want to write one like yours...
Parslie chapter 7 . 10/31/2005
Stop updating short segments! I need longer chapters...Happy birthday, and (more appropriatly) happy halloween! Plz update soon.
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