|Reviews for Dear Lover|
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/2/2016
Holy shit... Are you Raven?
| Moonlitraven chapter 1 . 9/29/2009
that is the most inspiring and beautiful poem ive ever met...
the last 2 stanzas always makes me cry...
| Shadow in the Rain chapter 1 . 11/24/2007
you're an incredible poet and writer, this is amazing.
| Luna Rapunzel chapter 1 . 7/26/2006
Just went through your profile and read the ones I felt like (aka most of them). Am actually getting a little teary at this one...
| Tink chapter 1 . 2/27/2006
I can relate and you have my sympathy.
| Missing a Member chapter 1 . 10/11/2005
aw thats so sweet i liked it.
| StargazerSarah chapter 1 . 8/22/2005
That was wonderful!
I tried writing a poem like that to the object of my affections but I also didn't give it to him and now he has forgotten me and reading your poem helped!
SO THANK YOU!
| someone chapter 1 . 7/28/2005
Your poem has helped me undestand one of my friends, who likes the same guy as I do. We are in a rivalry, like you, and at the 8th grade dance, i got to dance with the guy we both like (I think I love him...who knows?). I never really thought about how she felt until now, but when I read the poem, I actually knew how she felt.
I think you are gracious and kind inside for wanting your love to be happy no matter what.
Thank you for helping me see the other side with such a wonderful poem, and I would give you many hugs if I saw you. But since I can't, I'll close with this:
Don't give up. God has given you your special, and if this man isn't, then there will be another. If this man is, God will give him to you.
Keep your head up. Good luck.
| merines chapter 1 . 7/15/2005
I know how you feel...gosh this made me cry.
| I'll feing a smile and politely wave chapter 1 . 6/1/2005
unrequited love is horrid.
Beautiful poem. I think it could work as raven thinking about BB and Terra...
I hope life gets better for you.
| mew-xena chapter 1 . 5/20/2005
| Danni chapter 1 . 4/23/2005
I seriously love this poem it has so many emotions intwined into it. I felt like I was about to cray and I think it was about BB/Rae? But idk but i seriously loved it!
| janedoe091170 chapter 1 . 4/7/2005
This is beautiful...and I find I love poetry even more when it seems to, I guess, apply to my life. This could been Teen Titans, I suppose- Raven, jealous of Star being with Robin, or Raven being jealous of Terra with BB- I prefer the second- but I feel so very much the same.
I'll try to make sure this doesn't turn into a ramble...but maybe you'll get what I'm about to say. There's the boy I love with that perfect girl on his arm, the perfect personality and looks. And they're so PERFECT it makes me sick. I know I could get him, just by getting up at 4 in the morning to take a shower and primping and blowing all my cash on clothes and makeup and jewelry. But I don't WANT that. I want him to love me for me and not for what I look like, so I'll watch him from afar and keep quiet because I'd hate to see him worried about it...
Just maybe you relate to that, I dunno, but incredibly awesome poem.
| AbndXAllXSanity chapter 1 . 4/2/2005
'SNIFFLE' THAT WAS 'SNIFFLE' SO 'SNIFFLE' SAD! (RUNS AWAY CRYING)
| TheAngelsShadow chapter 1 . 3/16/2005
You really wrote that poem? That was really good! and i can totally relate to how that feels. Great story!