Reviews for For the Love of my Friends |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I think I had enough. Naruto in this story is probably the most worthless, underserving time traveler I've come across so far. He himself admits that despite having all the knowledge his past version did better than him. Talk about useless. Ugh. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I wonder why the writer insists on portraying Naruto as an utter moron when he's supposed to be a 22-year-old time-traveling war veteran. I mean he does absolutely no planning despite having all the future knowledge and instead does utterly moronic things like summoning a towering 100 feet toad boss in a small downtrodden country they are supposed to save. One which this towering toad could easily destroy with a few jumps here and there. Also whatever happened to him hiding his advanced abilities? |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was a terrible chapter. Filled with cringe. Almost everybody behaved like a utter moron. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I thought the writer was writing a better, mature version of Sakura. So it was disappointing to see her reverting back to the same old cliched version of Sakura, bashing Naruto at the drop of a hat and pathetically fawning over Sasuke-kun despite him not being present. Ugh. NaruHina at Iruka's funeral and Kakashi's flashback were rather well-written along with the scene where they found chibi-Sasuke. Looks like they're fighting the missing-nin next. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It was going well until the writer had Team Gai interfere. Hope they have a purpose other than the unneeded comedy. |
![]() ![]() ![]() He could have created hundreds of Kage Bunshins instead of blowing up trees and attracting attention. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Idiot Naruto! It's not even a day and already blowing his cover to smithereens... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why is it always that in the time-travel stories, Naruto goes from barely acknowledging Hinata's existence to being overly familiar to her as soon as he meets her? I've yet to find a single writer writing it happen naturally... |
![]() ![]() ![]() :: You've all been tolerant of my faults and stumbles. Thank you and good bye. Damn, that's a shame. This is, most likely, the most well-written Naruto fic I've seen so far. Not only is the writing quite decent, but the thought that went into pacing and characterisation is... well, virtually unheard-of in this fandom, I feel. Ah, well. It was good while it lasted. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yes, we know the Canon Naruto was stupid, but damn, he wasn't this retarded. Why is this considered cute or funny? He's supposed to be an adult. It's cute when kids are stupid, it stops being cute when you're supposed to be a grown ass man but act like you have 50iq. It's just... too much. |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice history, i hope to continue, see ya! |
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