|Reviews for Kim Possible: War of the Future|
| Anon chapter 1 . 11/2/2012
Unfinished eight years ago.
| nukefragger9000 chapter 1 . 11/14/2005
dude, there is so much wrong with this story, i literally dont know where to start. you should just take a quick second to actually think about what you are writing and what you help to accomplish. Try reading the REUNION series (written by G-Go) and the halo fanfic, HALO:SILENT SWORD (written by the plague and conlanger 56. or perhaps you should just abandon the idea of a kim possible/halo joint fanfic. the idea is cool, but there are so many holes in your idea. I suggest that you just drop fanfiction writing until an actually good plot/explaination for what you are writing.
YOUR WRITING IS HORRENDOUS, YOU NEED AN OVERHAUL!
| sgt.crackers chapter 1 . 4/30/2005
hey update i want to know how the story goes. i think its cool since im a fan of halo and all.
update there are few and fewer stories that i like that are updating
| Commander chapter 1 . 4/19/2005
This is really interesting I would like to see this continue.
| Chimera Spyke chapter 1 . 3/11/2005
WHY...WHY HAVENT YOU UPDATED? you cant just leave it just as its getting good. keep on writing even if you dont get that many reviews, mainly because you do have some loyal readers.
| rIcO chapter 1 . 11/29/2004
You shouldn't kill off Ron. All the stories I've read that have him getting killed basically suck unless they bring him back to life somehow( CPR, slapping, dropping him, dont matter).
He's too cool and the story won't be right without him.
Good first chapter though. keep updating
| Dwwar26 chapter 1 . 11/28/2004
It's a good storie keep it up . When are you going to add more chapter's?
| charizardag chapter 1 . 11/28/2004
it's good, keep at it.
also, add the Arbiter (the covenent elite from Halo 2) to help master chief (make it so he gets a human disguise)
| eckles chapter 1 . 11/28/2004
Interesting start. A little bummed at the idea of Ron meeting his maker thou.