Reviews for Marry Me!
a friend chapter 15 . 3/17/2017
I loved this. It's very well written. Even your interruptions, though somewhat distracting sometimes, did add a sense of self-awareness that made the story more fun. The feel of this story is sort of like a comedic fairytale - especially at the end. I enjoyed this story a whole lot.
Guest chapter 1 . 11/25/2016
That's an interesting name ya got there
Guest chapter 15 . 11/5/2016
I loved the story and your an amazing writer but I was slightly disappointed by the ending, but it was still amazing anyway!
delia cerrano chapter 15 . 7/12/2016
Good job. But I wish they had stayed together or parted only for a couple three weeks. I'm in a romantic mood.
Selene Jewell chapter 15 . 6/22/2015
This story absolutely made my day. Your voice as the narrator was perfect, and I especially loved when you did the whole backstory in parenthesis! You are an amazing storyteller and writer, and you and this story are definitely getting favorites from me!
Illiterate help chapter 15 . 4/2/2015
Hey, good story. The ending could use a little polishing and romanticizing up instead of just ending with a bunch of statements. Also it's ceased not seized. Seized is when you grab something or shake around and can die. Cease is when something stops.
littlepanther chapter 3 . 2/2/2014
i'm one of those BUT! only in a draco/blaise. But i like blaise if he's paired up with hermione or probablu seamus or ron (i've read couple of fics with those pairings). Coz i potray(is this the right word) blaise as draco's best friend and nothing else.
Guest chapter 15 . 1/20/2014
While I'm disappointed with the ending, I think you're a wonderful writer! I absolutely love your writing style! It's beautiful:)
Guest chapter 4 . 12/2/2013
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PhantomhiveMocca chapter 15 . 10/21/2013
Just that ?!
Not anymore ?!
Few years ?! you make them spare until few years ?!
I want more , more story of them .
Are this have sequel ?
natsuki23 chapter 3 . 7/6/2013
Totally did not expect that!
Sbinkley17 chapter 4 . 3/15/2013
I have an agonizingly strong urge to not finish this story only because you keep interrupting its telling! I will continue to struggle through reading it because I am genuinely curious as to how it ends. When you are focused on the plot, this story is amazing! Yes, I can see how some of the background you provide in your interruptions can be important, however, order of operations is key in writing! If you cannot insert the information in a organized and flowing fashion, perhaps it is not needed. By making references to readers and yourself, you break the illusion you are trying to create!

On a positive note I would like to say I genuinely like the plot so far, and your imagery is very well done. I will continue reading this story and if I love it in the morning I'll be sure to Favorite.

Please do not mistake my constructive criticism for abuse! I hope you keep writing; you seem to have a knack for it.
Twerky chapter 15 . 9/8/2012
I am kinda disappointed with the ending, I kept reading all day and found it was boring even though it was well-written just 1 exception that there was your comment in the middle story and sometimes you changed the POV and made confused who said that line.

Sorry I didn't mean to say this, but it was feeling. At least I could enjoy Harry cross dress. Thanks for writing this.
BBB chapter 15 . 2/17/2012
I read all of this, I don't know why I didn't quit after the third chapter. To be honest, it was well written from a grammer standpoint. But this story was just... awful. I know it was written a very long time ago, but it had so many side notes and spoilers and it was like I had to force myself to finish and I really wish I had just given up awhile ago.
SuN chapter 15 . 7/3/2011
What a piece of shit!
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