|Reviews for Marry Me!|
| a friend chapter 15 . 3/17/2017
I loved this. It's very well written. Even your interruptions, though somewhat distracting sometimes, did add a sense of self-awareness that made the story more fun. The feel of this story is sort of like a comedic fairytale - especially at the end. I enjoyed this story a whole lot.
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/25/2016
That's an interesting name ya got there
| Guest chapter 15 . 11/5/2016
I loved the story and your an amazing writer but I was slightly disappointed by the ending, but it was still amazing anyway!
| delia cerrano chapter 15 . 7/12/2016
Good job. But I wish they had stayed together or parted only for a couple three weeks. I'm in a romantic mood.
| Selene Jewell chapter 15 . 6/22/2015
This story absolutely made my day. Your voice as the narrator was perfect, and I especially loved when you did the whole backstory in parenthesis! You are an amazing storyteller and writer, and you and this story are definitely getting favorites from me!
| Illiterate help chapter 15 . 4/2/2015
Hey, good story. The ending could use a little polishing and romanticizing up instead of just ending with a bunch of statements. Also it's ceased not seized. Seized is when you grab something or shake around and can die. Cease is when something stops.
| littlepanther chapter 3 . 2/2/2014
i'm one of those BUT! only in a draco/blaise. But i like blaise if he's paired up with hermione or probablu seamus or ron (i've read couple of fics with those pairings). Coz i potray(is this the right word) blaise as draco's best friend and nothing else.
| Guest chapter 15 . 1/20/2014
While I'm disappointed with the ending, I think you're a wonderful writer! I absolutely love your writing style! It's beautiful:)
| Guest chapter 4 . 12/2/2013
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| PhantomhiveMocca chapter 15 . 10/21/2013
Just that ?!
Not anymore ?!
Few years ?! you make them spare until few years ?!
I want more , more story of them .
Are this have sequel ?
| natsuki23 chapter 3 . 7/6/2013
Totally did not expect that!
| Sbinkley17 chapter 4 . 3/15/2013
I have an agonizingly strong urge to not finish this story only because you keep interrupting its telling! I will continue to struggle through reading it because I am genuinely curious as to how it ends. When you are focused on the plot, this story is amazing! Yes, I can see how some of the background you provide in your interruptions can be important, however, order of operations is key in writing! If you cannot insert the information in a organized and flowing fashion, perhaps it is not needed. By making references to readers and yourself, you break the illusion you are trying to create!
On a positive note I would like to say I genuinely like the plot so far, and your imagery is very well done. I will continue reading this story and if I love it in the morning I'll be sure to Favorite.
Please do not mistake my constructive criticism for abuse! I hope you keep writing; you seem to have a knack for it.
| Twerky chapter 15 . 9/8/2012
I am kinda disappointed with the ending, I kept reading all day and found it was boring even though it was well-written just 1 exception that there was your comment in the middle story and sometimes you changed the POV and made confused who said that line.
Sorry I didn't mean to say this, but it was feeling. At least I could enjoy Harry cross dress. Thanks for writing this.
| BBB chapter 15 . 2/17/2012
I read all of this, I don't know why I didn't quit after the third chapter. To be honest, it was well written from a grammer standpoint. But this story was just... awful. I know it was written a very long time ago, but it had so many side notes and spoilers and it was like I had to force myself to finish and I really wish I had just given up awhile ago.
| SuN chapter 15 . 7/3/2011
What a piece of shit!