Reviews for The Chosen One
Saiya-jin Queen chapter 7 . 1/29/2005
I love this story. I think making a sequel is a good idea. Go for it! _
mystress jade chapter 6 . 1/12/2005
its getting really good please update soon
sarah chapter 2 . 12/29/2004
Wow. Loving the story! update soon!
ChibiBazooka chapter 6 . 12/27/2004
I love the story so far! I like how you had Zane explain the whole situation to Jade. _ Can't wait to see the next chapter!
Saiya-jin Queen chapter 5 . 12/20/2004
Wow...intense...Well, keep up the good work and please update soon.
sarah chapter 5 . 12/20/2004
poor Jade :( but lov the chapter!
sarah chapter 4 . 12/20/2004
hey! lov the story so far! keep up the writing! Rea's such a witch! haha... j/k
Slayer117 chapter 4 . 12/19/2004
um, it's cute but where's the action or adventure? it's like four introdutory chapters and it's not much of a cliff hanger.
Loves Yaoi chapter 3 . 12/16/2004
Yay! An update! It was good, I'm waiting for more.
daniangel chapter 3 . 12/12/2004
it's a cute story, but you have to bring in the dragonball theam soon. you can kind of see where zanes heratage comes from. keep writing.
seedeadpeople98 chapter 2 . 12/4/2004
permently kicked out of 'the' table. worst puishment. how much harsher can you get? lol. great chapter, update soon!
seedeadpeople98 chapter 1 . 12/4/2004
hey, love the chapter! keep writing! oh and watch out for mistakes!
Loves Yaoi chapter 1 . 12/2/2004
I loved it
Sarah once again chapter 2 . 11/30/2004
Another great chapter, but still don't forget to read over for mistakes. Can't wait to hear more!
sarah chapter 1 . 11/29/2004
great begining! there are a few errors but all in all it good. hope you update soon!