|Reviews for Out of Time|
| animeinsomniac chapter 3 . 12/10/2004
Wow. I have to say that these chapters are getting more and more interesting as you keep writing them. I am loving this story and I hope that you keep updating. I really can't think of anything else to say right now. So I guess that I'll see you next chapter!
| CrimsonKitty88 chapter 2 . 12/7/2004
o. coolie chapter. great job at portraying Batts as a confused teenager (I picked up the Batts part from anther story...yeah...I love to say it. _x)
| Birdy06 chapter 2 . 12/7/2004
Why'd you have'ta end it there?I think Kenshin's going to return to normal but he will constantly be fighting with his Battousai update soon. Arigatou!
| Babika chapter 2 . 12/7/2004
Hey! I love your story so far. Stories that center on the battousai with actual good writing are usually hard to find. I'm glad I came across this one.
| animeinsomniac chapter 2 . 12/6/2004
Another great chapter. I wasn't exactly sure how you were going to continue from chapter one, but this was a pleasure to read. Keep up the great work and I hope for another update soon.
| Nekotsuki chapter 2 . 12/5/2004
It's finally letting me review this story. *scowls and kicks the site* Normally if the site's playing up when I try and review I just shrug and wander off again. I'm lazy like that. _ But I had to come back to your story just to tell you how much it fascinates me. I've read some of your other stuff (I may have even reviewed it, I'm not sure...), but hands down this is the one that has me waiting for more! I can't be more specific than that, it's too early in the morning where I am ... but I'll seriously be looking forward to the next chapter. _
| White Rabbit Tale chapter 2 . 12/5/2004
What can I say about this chapter? I loved your mapping out of Battousai. It was, sincerely, flawless. I'm a little curious about that boy that Kenshin found-I don't really understand who he is. Hm...I wonder if Battousai is going to meet with Kaoru...THAT would be interesting. -
You know, I really like the way this plot is done. Most people do the "Battousai and Kenshin are two people!" but in yours it's just Kenshin in different times of his life.
| pyramidgirl89 chapter 2 . 12/5/2004
This story is interesting. I definitely hope you update soon!
| JaneDrew chapter 1 . 12/5/2004
Hmm.. if Kenshin is heading to Hiko in the Bakumatsu, does that mean that the Meiji-era Hiko remembers it happening? I do wonder how Kenshin will explain to Hiko that he's a future Kenshin-quickest way would probably be to demonstrate that he knows the succession moves now, and carries a sakabatou. ;-)
I hope that Battousai gets to see some of the other Kenshingumi members, not just Sano. That's bound to be a fun set of interactions. Since he's in Kyoto, it seems like the logical thing for Sano to do with a collapsed, possibly feverish Kenshin would be to take him to the Aoiya... now that would be... interesting (can't decide whether Battousai-meets-Aoshi or Battousai-glomped-by-Misao would be more amusing...)
Looking forward to the next chapter!
| lere chapter 2 . 12/5/2004
Wow! I found your fic today and must say I'm impressed. The two Kenshin are very similar to those in the manga and OVA. I don't like the way people describe Battousai. Watsuki's Battousai was a complex boy forced to grow up early and be not just a man but a murder. But we can see his suffering and sorrow because he is not a nature is kind and gentle. He is forced to kill under the believe it's the only way to help people and Katsura pushes Kenshin into it because he believes in the same thing.
I don't see Kenshin and Battousai like two separeted beings. They are the same man, but the first did mistakes for a good cause, the later is looking for answers to atone for his crimes.
The love for Tomoe just showed the right path to take. His true nature was found, but he couldn't be Shinta anymore or Battousai. I hope he can find the real Kenshin Himura in your fic.
Very good job!
Big hugs from Brazil,
| suriko song chapter 2 . 12/5/2004
I like this story its a good idea right more when you can.
| PattyBones chapter 2 . 12/5/2004
A very interesting story indeed. It is not weird just unusual. Please post the next chapter as soon as you can.
| LadyRhiyana chapter 2 . 12/4/2004
Very interesting so far. I'd love to see where you take this story - you write well, and have some great ideas, and your Battousai is very good.
I'd especially love to see the meeting with Hiko - that should be great fun.
| audsome chapter 2 . 12/4/2004
I don't think ken-chan would attack sano, also don't think sano could have dodged him but you did say he was hesitant.
wonder what hiko-sama will say to ken-san
| half-breed-demon-fox chapter 2 . 12/4/2004
good story when are they going to meet the others