Reviews for Shared Life
Drakus chapter 5 . 5/12/2005
Very good. I have no suggestions at this point. Keep it up.
dragon-game chapter 5 . 5/12/2005
Good story.

Please continue it soon.
Wonderbee31 chapter 5 . 5/12/2005
You know, this chapter started out so light, and got progressively darker as it went, and the last words of Kenosuke at the end, things are going to get bad soon. I wonder who else is trying to stop things from going agead, though it looks as though Genm an the other men knew what was going on, and were definitely trying to stop it. I hope that things can somehow turn out well fro Ranma, Kasumi and Nabiki, though I have a feeling, that with those three together, they may well be unstoppable if they really try. NBice to see that the reason Ryoga has a direction curse is, he's an ass and an idiot. I almost wish that she'd done something worse to the honorless moron.
angel-1844 chapter 5 . 5/12/2005
I like the update i was wondering what that ascension was. I really hope you update soon this is a great story.
Lerris chapter 5 . 5/12/2005
The chapter looks good. The ending seemed a bit abrupt though...

If it wasn't for your trailing comments I'd have wondered if that was the ending.
Silverscale chapter 5 . 5/12/2005
A very good chapter, keep it up.
dwayne chapter 4 . 5/12/2005
if i were you i wouldnt kill off Ranma, Nabiki, or Kasumi alot a people wouldnt like you for that
ranma hibiki chapter 5 . 5/12/2005
woah!...sounds like kasumi and nabiki might be in trouble. but who could be interfering. i doubt its happi as he just wants ranma as his heir and to "train"(read tourture) him. it could be the amazons or one of the other rivals or just neramia its self somehow.
James Axelrad chapter 5 . 5/12/2005

i hope to see another chapter from you soon.
dogbertcarroll chapter 5 . 5/12/2005
Impressive, as always.

What is the effect of the ascension on

Kasumi and Nabiki going to be?

Write quickly.
migele chapter 5 . 5/12/2005
Yay! another chap. I really like it.

hope the story goes on soon.

Ideas. I'm not sure if the Ascension would work without Ranma wanting it, or if Kito would accept it.

Oh and screw Happy over since he IS at fault, as indicated. Hmm make Khun Lo find Happy's interference out through Genma.

Spying on Genma should reveal the fault and the new situation, I think Kito should do it.
Jerry Unipeg chapter 5 . 5/12/2005
GREAT CHAPTER! No one still ask Ranma. chapter 5 . 5/11/2005
Quite a long flashback that explained in details quite a number of things. Nice. Though the last line promises troubles...
Gangsta Spanksta chapter 5 . 5/11/2005
Well I certainly hope this ascension fails and Kito and her Dad gets what's coming to them. It is quite obvious that they deserve no such power and aren't responsible enough to use it. I don't see Ranma forgiving them because they hurt the two Tendos and Nabiki is way to smart. Anyway I suspect there much darker forces working in the background here and Kito and her pops might find themselves out classed by 30 years of amazon history, as they will have to face a wrathful Kho Lon.
JohnnyG chapter 5 . 5/11/2005
Great chapter. It'll be interesting to see if Kito does end up with Ranma. I mean, what's one more when you already have two? ~_O Of course, it might be more possible if the Ascension creates some kind of link between the two (or all four since Ranma is already connected to the two Tendo girls). Anyhow, keep up the good work.


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