Reviews for Harry Potter and the Last of the Death Eaters
the Jersey Girl Next Door chapter 6 . 10/10/2005
omg i feel bad for harry n hermione but they will b very safe at hogwarts please post again as soon as possible

thnx

the jersey girl next door
lilycarverjb chapter 2 . 4/27/2005
aw dont cry! ron and cho...hminteresting but pretty good... might i have a suggestion? its a little ooc in some parts but other then that i love it... and its not bad so dont think that!lol

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lilycarverjb chapter 1 . 4/27/2005
aw how swet! good job keep it up

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andrewdean1313 chapter 6 . 2/28/2005
This is a good fic, I like the mystery, it has a really good plot so far, but you haven't updated in over a month, i hope your not giving up, i just read all 6 chapters, and i think it's really good, so keep up the good work and update soon, it's long overdue
MEESHELLE chapter 6 . 2/8/2005
I FINALLY FOUND UR STORY! YAY! it's so good... i'm in awe v. good. v. good. . and lots of hermione and harry fluff... sigh ..the elements of a good storry. even though im not a fan of hermione/hairy (*DRACO and HERMIONE r MEANT FOR EACH OTHER) you did it FANTASTICALLY enough to make me SMILE. marfellous. the only ploblem is that well i dunno i just wanted to use the word ploblem lol. i liked the aurors rockhall and shraddie use them again! and can u make cho evil? and manipulative? i don't like her for some reason. IDEA: make it that crookshanks was a SECRET SECRET animagus that faked his own death like ratboy and was spying on hairy always and is evil OR he could be faking his death but still be good. somehow. u figure it out lol. actually my idea is a bit unbelievable but anyway. i'm just doing what u asked! ideas for what will happen... thinking.. oh i have an idea how about... when they go back to hogwarts they find that EITHER 1. mcgonagall and dumbledore are finally together after confessing their longstanding love for one another or 2. mcgonagall and dumbledore obviously have feelings for each other which keep manifesting in little glances etc and hairy and hermy see this and set them up HAHAHA. i hope u use one of my ideas:) i like mrs weasly u made her nice ok i really can't think of anything else to say except for KUNG HEY FAT CHOI (HAPPY CHINESE NEW YEAR!) which is today i think. love MICHY BELL
leatherlibrarian chapter 6 . 2/2/2005
okay first of all let me say that you seem to be a good writer and you're off to a good start. Some constructive criticism can go a long way though so this is just to help you. You've taken the character away from the characters. Hermione seems really OOC- you portray her as a scared little housewife with Harry being the ultimate protector- try to remember hermione is the smarter more intellectual one. Most of your characters are a little flat and some 2D for instance no personality is coming out from their dialogue- what they say could belong to anyone- do you understand what I mean? Your description is good but i think what you're excellent at is suspense. Your last chapter was definitely the best- i LOVED rockhall and whathername put them in again- really good stuff. good story overall.
Charmo chapter 6 . 1/30/2005
Hey bean pole,

plz make it so that the aurors have sumtin 2 do wit it

like they betray them yeh...

n tell me whether the dam cat is dead!

juhz kidding...stop keepin us in the shadows we all want 2 know MORE

Quick sticks n WRITE MORE!

luv ya,

charminny
Hendo chapter 6 . 1/25/2005
hey hey its me again :D that was good...are the people investigating it going to be a big part in it or not?

i hope its not crookshanks
BeaumontRulz chapter 6 . 1/23/2005
hey dude. yeah ok not bad. still likin so plz update soon. oh and i have no clue wtf will happen next chpt.

::Alex::
Stella Blu chapter 6 . 1/23/2005
YAY! More...PLease and thank you.

~Blu

ps: Sorry its not longer... its one am and I just got home, so yeah...
dizzyyet chapter 5 . 1/19/2005
wow! so much suspense. i love it! you're a really good writer! keep it up. man you have some really good ideas! poor crookshanks though. eventhough i didn't like the cat all that much. still didn't deserve it. well i love this story so i'll put you on author alert! now i know when you update! mwahahahahaha! later days dude. ash
hendo chapter 5 . 12/30/2004
please keep writitng - i never erally like crookshanks, beacsue i dont really like cats but i hope hes alright

hurry ur bum up and update
tiffany your cousin chapter 1 . 12/17/2004
hey justine that was realy good story its better than the first real ones you should publish it lol

luv ya always tiffany
laruen chapter 5 . 12/16/2004
justine, plz write the next chapter

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with a cherry on top!

love lauren
lauren chapter 4 . 12/16/2004
justine, this is such an exciting story!
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