Reviews for He's not Yours
HeartlessAi chapter 1 . 7/7/2010
It's short but I love it! Keep on writing these awesome FE stories!
Udyjay chapter 1 . 6/5/2008
Okay, any of those assholes who reviewed this against Karel being gay is retarded. First off, this is motherfucking fanfiction. Second of all, Fire Emblem is full of hot, sexy, slashable guys, all waiting to be paired up with one another. So fuck all of you angry, pitiful haters. I fucking loved this fic.

It wasn't out of character at all. The fact that it is forbidden, and how they mostly mate out of lust and Karel's hate- that Eliwood isn't 'his'... I find it VERY in character. So don't listen to these idiots' bullshit. Because this was wonderful.
random me chapter 1 . 10/17/2006
okay people shouldn't knock you for your pairings. I mean compared to some things I've seen this was pretty mild. So it was good short but good
KupoKupoKupo chapter 1 . 1/29/2006
Dude...

Get a freaking life! This is sick!
Back Alley Guru chapter 1 . 7/31/2005
Hey, so I thought this fic was decent. It's definitely a nice pairing, but in all honesty, I can see Karel with just about anyone. He's the sort of guy that would just pick someone who fascinates him and damned if anything will stop him from doing anything. I think that this captured that nicely. It was a very fluid story, but I've one bit of cc for you. The story runs smoothly and does what a good story should do- puts you into a semitrance in the mindset of the teller. The one thing that breaks this illusion is the utilization of the word "girlfriend". Change that and I think it would be all but perfect.

As to Nickolus Elflame, I think he's simply got the bias of a narrow minded socioty set in his head. I challenge him to tell my one decent reason why Karel could not be gay, or bisexual or whathave you.
BoomSickle chapter 1 . 7/8/2005
What the hell is wrong with you! The little house in the woods, and now this! All of you reviewers make me sick! No, you make me pity you. Karel? Gay? youve been watching too much porn
Ryuhi and Sayo chapter 1 . 1/3/2005
Sayo: THAT'S WHAT I LIKE!

Ryuhi: -,- you like any kind of Sex.

Sayo: Hey!...i do.

Ryuhi: It's good. and if you keep writing i am most certain, Sayo there will return...maybe even with his sibling...

Sayo: THAT'S RITE! YOU KEEP WRIITING!
flamefirefox chapter 1 . 12/12/2004
that was short.. but good.. it was almost like a poem.. prose.. thingie.. o_o lol.. hard to imagine Karel with Eliwood though .. X3 ah well.. lol D niceness.. k.. I'm braindead now.. so yesh.. i shall stop bugging you _! laters !
Ice Phoenoix chapter 1 . 12/5/2004
Is this a one shot? I may not know much about the fire emblem seires but i atleast know who your talking about. A bit too short. If you write another chapter to this, are you going to make it longer?

P.S. I love the fact that you put spacing between your paragrahs.
Autumn Sacura chapter 1 . 12/1/2004
Wow! I think Karel/Eliwood is good pairing! Remember - when Eliwoog recruits Karel, their conversation looks so meaningful... Good idea, good fic but too short!
Amethyst Bubble chapter 1 . 11/30/2004
Where ever did you think of this pairing? o.o When I looked at the summary, I had first thought that I had read it wrong. Karel/Eliwood? Well, it certainly is unique. The fic was pretty good. Short, but nice. Your spacing seems to be a little off, though. I'd suggest trying to fix that... That's my only complaint.

Karel/Eliwood...How interesting... *Contemplating it*

*Ammy