Reviews for Lunacy
AshxMay54321 chapter 4 . 10/16/2013
This isn't really advancedshipping it's more like pokeshipping w/ misty. I mean its kind of boring I didnt really understand the concept of this story.
brompton.pikachuu chapter 4 . 10/1/2012
why is ash and misty married and i like the story
Uzamaki Hinata chapter 4 . 8/28/2008
Kay, trying to top my last review which was... very sucky xP Anyways...

Wow, just wow, your writing is awesome and not only that, I remember reading this years ago and thinking: this isn't like any other AS story. Which is true, because it isn't. You don't have the common, cliche AS fanfic of Ash and May realizing his or her own feelings and then falling on love with the other person's body and not feelings. Yours had more of a story behind it. Not too mention that it was sad but ended in a very hopeful way that had me going, "wow, what a great fanfic".

I love the fact that May was a strange ghost and pulled Ash away from his inability to be out in the sun and even though she was OC she still felt incredibly in character.

Again, your writing is superb and I love that you gave Ash such a problem with his skin, making this, as I mentioned before, not your typical AS story. Four chapters usually seems short for a story, but it was more than enough for yours. Honestly, this fanfic is so good that I find myself re-reading it from time to time.

Thanks for writing such an awesome story and I hope this topped my previous review (lol) D
KiraKeybladeMaster chapter 4 . 10/22/2007
Great story, it got to me a little. But it was kinda f'ed up how Ash died. Maybe he was just claustrophobic...
Matkin22 chapter 1 . 9/22/2007
This is one of the best Fanfics that I have ever read. I can't even describe how I felt when reading it. Your style of writing is really good; it comes across as being very formal, and works perfectly for this plot. The way you were able to include Ash, Misty, May, and Brock, make them recognizeable and yet your own characters at the same time was phenomenal.

Keep up the excellent work; I'll be watching for your next submissions.
CHUMP chapter 4 . 8/2/2007
Uh dude{or whatevr } this is like a Fantasy horror . jeez i hate fantasy and horror. Oh and i wouldnt say this is kinda Advanceshipp
CHUMP chapter 1 . 7/13/2007
Wow cool Ash*S Uncle dies..THEN HE WAS THINKING A BOUT SOMEIN WHEN A METORITE CAME FROM OUTER SPACE ASH WENT TO FING OUT WANT IT IS AND THEN A "SYMBOITE " { FROM SPIDER MAN 3 } JUMPS ON HIM AND THEN BECOMES " THE BLACK SPIDER -MAN { BUT HE IS GOOD } "
haru-teri22 chapter 4 . 6/9/2007
it's so lovely and dear

wonderful story!

it was heart touching!

*tear*

ohh misty was so evil!

haha
haru-teri22 chapter 1 . 6/9/2007
it's confusing how you

sometimes change

'Ash' to 'Satoshi'

non the less...

i love your writing style!

love the story too! :]
who chapter 4 . 5/11/2007
beautiful. ten stars.
NarutoNinja44 chapter 4 . 5/9/2007
Awsm story, I mean it.

Its the best Advanceshipping story I've read without a sequal.

Plz put the epilouge up!

But I almost cried at the end, and really good stories can only push me that far.

I give you a 10 out of 10!
Martini the chobbit chapter 3 . 4/23/2007
wow the story reminds me of my gothic lit. class that i accidentally took :p freaky.
SakuraDrops93 chapter 4 . 4/14/2007
aww man! .
Mia chapter 4 . 3/9/2007
okay...i'm confounded...what just happened
He chapter 4 . 12/27/2006
nice fic, i know someone like him, but he don't have a happy end... i think... Be careful with all, even your mind
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