|Reviews for A Different Kind of Holiday|
| Livia2001 chapter 4 . 8/19/2012
This is a great story! I haven't noticed any kind of decline in the quality, on the contrary it feels to me like it keeps getting better and better. I love how you keep surprising me with what happens next and the only disappointing thing about it is that there isn't MORE!
| Guest chapter 4 . 7/15/2012
Well, I think this was better than a lot of stuff on the web. Wish you would finish it even if it has been 7 years gap. Hope RL is better now.
| bluedragon1836 chapter 4 . 10/12/2011
Please don't stop writing this story! I want to know what happens!
| Iratus chapter 4 . 9/25/2011
I too hope you can find the time and the inclination to finish this story. You have done a good job of keeping the characters in character and while there are some errors, which having a beta can help with, your writing is far from bad
| Trashbags chapter 4 . 3/13/2011
GAH! How dare you leave it there! I want to know what happens! This is a great story, GAH! You had my full attention and then you end it! GAH! What happens! Not knowing the ending is killing me! GAH! *Deep breath*. I'm okay. I could be better, but I'm okay and will not yell anymore. This is a good story and wish you would continue with it.
| hoellenwauwau chapter 4 . 9/18/2008
Why is it the best stories never seem to get finished? And this is Face-centric, for crying out loud. I'm dying for a good story like your's and you're telling us that someone complained about your writing skill? Is this person insane? This is such a great story, you got the characters so right and I loved the scene between Face and Amy. There is action in it and so much Face-humour, it's just great! Okay, so I realise it's been some time since you posted this story, but I really hope - no, I'm begging you - you continue this story someday! Please!
| verolo chapter 3 . 8/25/2008
Hi, you still not writing this story? Why? Is really great!
Please finish it!
| camerabugs chapter 1 . 8/21/2007
This is a great story. Please don't keep us hanging!
| Wildfire's Flame chapter 4 . 7/20/2007
Okay, First off whoever told you that your writing was slipping is a moron. Secondly, I sincerely hope that you are not living in a cardboard box somewhere . . .
Thirdly, I am a huge A-team fan and have been since I was little girl and they were first aired. I just never thought about looking at fanfiction until now since I have recently become re-addicted to the team.
Fourthly, this story just got added to my favorite list. I would love to see more of this story if you have it. I love that Face and Amy were so at odds with one another in the beginning and the car scene in the garage was awesome. I also loved the whole Electrogon scenario. Face sure is inventive. And when he was trying to clean himself up that was pure Face. I am on the verge of my seat wanting to see how this all plays out.
I know that you haven't written in awhile and that you only did two stories and it doesn't look like you have really added any favorite authors to your list so I am not sure if you are even active on this site or if you will even be aware that you are getting this review but I absolutely love your story and I seriously hope that you continue it at some point. Have a great day.
| fleeting fancy chapter 4 . 3/28/2007
Just stumbled onto the A-Team fics. I know it's way late to the game but just wanted to say (in case you still get review notifications even after all of this time) that this is one of the better fics here. I loved Face giving Amy such a hard time in the first chapter and I like fics that get right to the action. It's too bad it went unfinished. Sorry that people discouraged you. I see nothing wrong with your writing at all.
| Wattestaebchen chapter 4 . 3/18/2007
Actually I really like it...Don't know what they want...You have a nice plot and many questions yet to be answered...and what is for me the most important thing...The characters are really nice...I would enjoy another chapter..
| verolo chapter 4 . 1/29/2007
I just read your story, and I hope to read more in the future.
Thanks for share this.
PD: did you know there are a Ateam web page for stories like this?
| HollyChamp chapter 1 . 3/13/2006
Please, please, pretty please finish this story. I want to know what happens. Thank you.
| xsilicax chapter 4 . 2/26/2006
I've just stumbled across this fic and can I say that I am very impressed! you've managed to touch on the strengths of each character without losing any of the team dynamic. I like the shift in perspective from character to character, as it provides insight into their thoughts and actions, while adding to the suspense.
If I could make a request though, it would be to have the next chapter from Amy's perspective, because that's where you started, and I'm starting to feel the need to know what has happened to her. It will also be interesting to see if her opinion of Face changes from start through to his (attempted?) rescue.
As to the whole writing slipping, I don't think you've lost any skill in that department! The only thing I think could be improved upon is to linger a little more with each character. I feel (very slightly) at certain points, that you want to move the story on faster than it wants to be written, in order to get to the action, and that the characters may suffer slightly in response.
Thta said, this is far beyond much of the fiction in both this genre and others. If you're unhappy with the results then by all means go back and change it. ultimately this is your work, and you need to look at it and be proud, but be assured that there will be many of us waiting happily for updates.
Good luck and fingers crossed for more, soon,
| cooroo chapter 4 . 1/13/2006
Aw, c'mon, don't give up! Please continue writing... for me? Please! This is great! I'm really enjoying reading it! It's great! PLease continue! I don't know what people mean when they say it's not good! It's really good! Please update soon!