|Reviews for Twelve Days of Torture|
| The fanster chapter 12 . 3/19
Awesome story! The suspense was horrible and amazing at the same time...but...after such a good story...Robin? not Beast Boy?
| OlicityShipper19 chapter 12 . 2/4
This story was very well done! I really got into it! I love this! Raven and Robin Forever!
| Astrallum chapter 12 . 9/3/2016
Wonderful story! I'm happy that it turned out to be Robin!
Though, I must ask...
What about that "thing with Starfire"?
| Astrallum chapter 11 . 9/3/2016
You're too clever. You're too clever.
"A perfect Christmas color." Red and green, they're BOTH perfect Christmas colors...
| Astrallum chapter 10 . 9/3/2016
So glad it isn't Cyborg, LOL. Not that I hate him...but I'm glad you didn't choose him.
BUT...you chose Beast Boy and Robin...
DO YOU EVEN KNOW HOW MUCH I LOVE BBRAE AND ROBRAE? D:
(Though I'd be perfectly happy if it turned out to be Beast Boy, I'm still going with Robin, since HE seems to be the more likely choice.)
| Astrallum chapter 7 . 9/3/2016
I have. Obviously the admirer does like birds a lot...so I'm still sticking to Robin for my guess.
No, I'm not changing it. It's obvious.
(Unless you give us a twist ending and say it's either Beast Boy or Cyborg...in which case I'll be VERY disappointed in myself.)
| Astrallum chapter 5 . 9/3/2016
Cyborg could have probably made the ring himself (IF he made it).
And poor Raven. Finally figuring out that she'll be getting gifts for one more week...seven more days...
(And boy, you are confusing me. You think you can be real ambiguously sneaky here? All these clues are mixing me up...but I've got to give it to you, you're REALLY good at writing mystery. REALLY good.)
| Astrallum chapter 4 . 9/3/2016
Let me guess where Robin was this morning...
He was buying the four stuffed birds for her and making the gift.
Hence the reason why he wasn't here at the tower while Beast Boy and Cyborg were playing video games!
That doesn't, however, explain Starfire...
I'm just going to guess she went to the "mall of shopping" while Robin was busy preparing his gift. XD
(But then again, Cyborg or Beast Boy could have made it. Maybe they're just getting a little better at hiding their secret. I am, however, going with Robin for my final guess as to who this admirer could be. It is definitely him. Unless I'm wrong.)
| Astrallum chapter 3 . 9/3/2016
(OK...so it ISN'T Red X. I was sort of half-hoping it was at first, but seeing that you wrote that he was finishing up his dinner "enjoying the company of the other Titans" I have to rule out Red X. So I've come to conclude that...)
It's Robin. I'm 80% sure of that.
The last sentence ("...he wasn't after all the best detective of all time.") implies that it's talking about Robin because...isn't he a detective? And I noticed you put the descriptions of Beast Boy and Cyborg at the table IN THE SAME PARAGRAPH while you dedicated a whole separate paragraph to describing how Raven was looking at Robin so it HAS to be him. It has to be.
Plus - being named after a bird - he does have a penchant for them...hence Ebony and the doves and the French hen cookbooks.
And the French hen incident would rule out Beast Boy because he wouldn't have thought about picking out the different colored garlands from the boys' rooms and cutting them precisely at four inches. Plus, even if he did think about the garland thing, his cutting wouldn't have been that precise.
But I'm pretty sure that he'd try to be suave and cool to woo over Raven, so...maybe? It seems, though, that the answer's pointing (mostly) to Robin. Considering that you've written a couple RobRae stories...I wouldn't be surprised if it was him. XD It's clear you like the pairing. But then again...it could be a BBRae or CyRae story.
(And, honestly...I'm not sure about Cyborg. I guess he's just about as logical as Robin with organizing that kind of stuff with the gifts and all that, but I can't see him doing it, really? That might be mostly because I really am not a fan of the Cyborg/Raven pairing, but I just can't. No way.)
Still a great story, though! I love how you're actually trying to keep it hidden even after you've completed it. Because honestly, I've read a couple of these kinds of stories (who-done-it and all that other kind of stuff) and they give the answer away in the description. :( There might be some people who might read your story after several years, you know!
| Astrallum chapter 2 . 9/3/2016
Ooh, I got a feeling it isn't Cyborg, Beast Boy, or Robin. They're "passing by" one of the Titan windows so it has to be someone outside the Teen Titans.
Hmm...let me take a guess...
Speedy? He'd laugh to himself if he ever saw that...or Red X. RED X. It's got to be him.
(And besides, I'm not quite fond of Speedy/Raven so I'm going with Red X.
| Astrallum chapter 1 . 9/3/2016
Ooh, this sounds like an interesting story!
I'm crossing my fingers for either Robin or Beast Boy...
(but slightly more for Robin, LOL)
And I won't mind if it's Cyborg. I just hope the ending isn't too fluffy. I'm honestly not into CyRae. XD
| GnCdwll chapter 12 . 8/2/2016
D'AAAAWW THEY'RE SOOO PERF TOGETHER I LOVE IT :D tho I wish you could have made an epilogue :)
| Raven chapter 12 . 6/23/2016
| Guest chapter 12 . 3/10/2016
What about Star? DDD: shes probably gonna suicide now... I really wanted bbxrae. Nice story, but ohhhh i hate you so so much.
| Guest chapter 5 . 7/2/2015
Raven is really frustrated ..it's obviously robin he's getting more suspicious . I seriously love this story