|Reviews for Slouching Towards Bethlehem|
| loonygrl90 chapter 2 . 1/7/2005
Omg! That's an *evil* cliffie!
I love the way you're writing Harry... it's perfect!
This is torture, please update soon! ;~)
| dolphinology chapter 1 . 12/3/2004
You have got me curious. Malfoy being gone would have raised a high alert that something big was going to happen. I thought that part was interesting. What was Lupin doing there? I noticed one thing that I think you miss. In the second paragraph, you have Mr. Dursley's old socks. Shouldn't it be Uncle Veron's old socks? I'll be waiting for the next chapter.
| Chou ni Natte chapter 1 . 12/2/2004
o_o Looks so interesting! I was thinking...maybe Malfoy dissapearing has to do with what Remus and Harry talked about. I'm really interested to see what will happen next, keep up the good work!
| My Cat Frank chapter 1 . 12/2/2004
You're a Yeats fan! When I first saw the title I wondered, "is this a reference to 'The Second Coming' or is it just a coincidence?" Then the chapter title happily confirmed it for me. I'm really intrigued, and interested to see how you interpret the poem into this work. What *was* Lupin doing at Hogwarts, and is it connected to Draco's disappearance? Keep writing!
| Vasaris the Fuzzy Dragon chapter 1 . 12/2/2004
I rather like your Harry. The frustration of waiting is, I think, realistically portrayed and I can just see omg!CAPSLOCK Harry behaving in just that way.