|Reviews for The New Mrs Weasley|
| ironhair chapter 28 . 5/4
You might like all the good reviews and hate all the negative comments, but this is truly a sad turn of an interesting concept.
Wont call it a pathetic story as even though hermione and Fred are completely out of character, u had a decent fic going... If i ignore who the characters actually are.
What made this horrible is the lack of any common sense, any explanation or any reason why half the things happened. U might think u have explained it well, but my questions from the first chapter review still remain unanswered even now.
The main one being.. WHY would the weasley elders put them all in bethrothal contracts?
Others being, why would hermione accept out of the blue when she showed no interest in Fred at all earlier.. Why hide it from Harry and Ron esp when Ron and others are in the same frigging boat? How could she forget telling her parents about it... Was she drugged or high? Do u think u would do something as callous or stupid like that? ( as writers are said to write from personal experience/choices).
I am actually sad i increased ur bloated review count, but writing one more review in the hopes that u do a rewrite and post a better story with the flaws addressed... Otherwise, this is just a stereotype mills and boons story with hp characters thrown in, that makes NO sense. Horrible.
| ironhair chapter 6 . 5/4
6 chapters and ur story premise has still not been explained.
| ironhair chapter 3 . 5/4
Is hermione stupid or high thst she agreed in 3 mins? Puh-leez.
| ironhair chapter 1 . 5/4
Why? What's the point of the bethrothal?
How did Percy's intended run away and marry someone else without consequences?
What happens if they break it? If they don't marry, but just live in?
| thonez chapter 30 . 5/3
sweet story except pacing. Upto 15 chapter it was great story. Then fillers started and it was obvious that they are together but too stupid. Hermione leaving was unbelievable.
| chibi-Clar chapter 30 . 4/6
| chibi-Clar chapter 28 . 4/6
Yay! Ron convinced him too!
| chibi-Clar chapter 26 . 4/6
| chibi-Clar chapter 22 . 4/6
They're in love!
| chibi-Clar chapter 21 . 4/6
Ha! They're so used to each other!
| chibi-Clar chapter 20 . 4/6
Ha! Second time!
| chibi-Clar chapter 18 . 4/6
Will Hermione get pregnant ?
| chibi-Clar chapter 15 . 4/6
Time is going to be slow
| chibi-Clar chapter 14 . 4/6
| chibi-Clar chapter 13 . 4/6
Lol! This is awesome!