i feel so sad for takao.
Sniff sniff.

WOW this is so nice

Woah. What a fic.

Now THAT is real literature.

Man,I thought the POV was Dragoon's!Awesome.

this abstract way of writing is quite new to me, but I think it was worth the experiment. You can certainly handle such forms of writing quite well. Practice more and I'll bet you'll be better. Just be careful not to veer from your original ideas, though I highly doubt you do...

Confusing, yes, but amazing, nonetheless. It did work out well-the confusion actually played right into the hands of the story. Personification of Tyson's happiness? Interesting idea. And it definitly worked out well. The scene where (I think) Tyson's happiness is talking to him is just amazing...It's a interesting idea of Tyson. A side we don't really see in the series, but still a important one. Well, what can I say? It's awesome, really, sad and awesome!

Kumusta, twincharm

Very good. This is so interesting and sad. I'm now jumping for joy and really lost in this strange fantasy but I like. I tried reviewing this but for some reason it wouldn't let me before.

Paalam, Dementedness

I can see the altered chapter now,everything makes sence now to me.

That was really clever thought of...a p.o.v. of Tyson's happy side,very original.

whatever you say make Kai and Hilary the couple!

PLEASE!

UPDATE!

Very emotional.

Hutchy 0

Hmm,I've rad this fic several times now,and I think the person talking is either kenny or Ray,they seem to be able to thinki like that.

Anyway the fic is wonderful,you are truly talented.

Even though you used a different style it was great. I liked it, a lot.

this is interesting, i'm not sure who's pov this is in. or if it is in third. try explaining it better. though it was really good. you write some awsome stories, try reading mine sometime.

Different... But me likes!

i thought it was awesome...but one question who was talking? i got confused cause it wasn't kai, hilary, max, rei, kenny, or grandpa...so here i am confused...although it was awesome! very great...i wonder how knowing tyson killed himself because of kai and hil's relationship would change it...would they stay together...maybe you could do a follow up...only if u want...EXCELLENT!