|Reviews for Comatose: Original|
| Jessie S chapter 6 . 7/11/2005
Ok. I absolutly adore this story. Possitivly marvolous. Definatly in my top 5 for BB/Rae fics. Keep the quality of this fic in all your stories and youll be happy w/ the results. Beautifly written and last but not least I abosolutly suppect that this is what would happen if this were to happen. Bravo and Im out!
| Lonus chapter 6 . 7/10/2005
that was a great fic cant wait to read all of your future material
| SnufflesWillRISE chapter 6 . 7/7/2005
Omg This was so good!
| DarkRaven888 chapter 6 . 7/5/2005
Great story! You probably had to do alot of thinking to come up with something so, good like this. Who knows maybe when you're in a coma you can really use your senses. Good work!
| HPFan chapter 1 . 6/25/2005
How dare you make my favorite character go into a coma!
Otherwise great story...meany. :(
| The Mad shoe chapter 6 . 6/24/2005
| Megaira chapter 6 . 6/22/2005
this was very well written. the emotion was clear and very well displayed.
its clear that u have mastered the art of inner thoughts as well as dialogue...
i am impressed... nice job!
| Satu-D-2 chapter 6 . 6/21/2005
YAY! Go BBXRae... That was so believable...
| PurrJaede chapter 6 . 6/17/2005
I :don't: act like that.I have absolutely no feelings for Beast Boy.
Raven,you are in serious denial...
| kittydragon chapter 6 . 6/11/2005
that was one of the cutest stories i've ever read! obviously, i really liked it.
| TheUbu chapter 6 . 6/11/2005
This story was great! For a shorter story you managed to put a lot into it without cramming things up. When I read the part about the memorial I was shocked and kind of angry that you would end it there but was releaved when I found out it was only a dream. The final chapter was touchingly romantic and was done in such a way that it didn't seem cheesy.
Thanks for writing such a great story!
| AGENT S chapter 6 . 6/3/2005
fucking excilent...brillent...best story ever i know it was short but it got my attention from the very first words written B.B was great and his thoughts were sarcastic and funny and so like him i loved your story keep writing
cya shellii X
| CalliopeMused chapter 6 . 5/17/2005
Cute. Nice story, well played-out, and the only slightly confusing bit was the dream of Raven's-going-to-kill-you-all, which looked real for a minute. I don't know who would dare flame Canada. I'm from the US, and know the best thing about the place. You can drink at nineteen. What could ever be wrong with that?
| teardrops03 chapter 6 . 5/15/2005
That was incredible. Granted, this story's been done for forever, but I read and reviewed it anyways. And I loved every bit of it. Great job!
| teardrops03 chapter 5 . 5/15/2005
YOU SCARED THE CRAP OUT OF ME! But that was a great chapter.
And yay Beast Boy's awake!