Reviews for Comatose: Original
Jessie S chapter 6 . 7/11/2005
Ok. I absolutly adore this story. Possitivly marvolous. Definatly in my top 5 for BB/Rae fics. Keep the quality of this fic in all your stories and youll be happy w/ the results. Beautifly written and last but not least I abosolutly suppect that this is what would happen if this were to happen. Bravo and Im out!
Lonus chapter 6 . 7/10/2005
that was a great fic cant wait to read all of your future material
SnufflesWillRISE chapter 6 . 7/7/2005
Omg This was so good!
DarkRaven888 chapter 6 . 7/5/2005
Great story! You probably had to do alot of thinking to come up with something so, good like this. Who knows maybe when you're in a coma you can really use your senses. Good work!
HPFan chapter 1 . 6/25/2005
How dare you make my favorite character go into a coma!

Otherwise great story...meany. :(
The Mad shoe chapter 6 . 6/24/2005
So sweet!
Megaira chapter 6 . 6/22/2005
this was very well written. the emotion was clear and very well displayed.

its clear that u have mastered the art of inner thoughts as well as dialogue...

i am impressed... nice job!
Satu-D-2 chapter 6 . 6/21/2005
YAY! Go BBXRae... That was so believable...
PurrJaede chapter 6 . 6/17/2005
aw...

I :don't: act like that.I have absolutely no feelings for Beast Boy.

Raven,you are in serious denial...
kittydragon chapter 6 . 6/11/2005
that was one of the cutest stories i've ever read! obviously, i really liked it.
TheUbu chapter 6 . 6/11/2005
This story was great! For a shorter story you managed to put a lot into it without cramming things up. When I read the part about the memorial I was shocked and kind of angry that you would end it there but was releaved when I found out it was only a dream. The final chapter was touchingly romantic and was done in such a way that it didn't seem cheesy.

Thanks for writing such a great story!
AGENT S chapter 6 . 6/3/2005
fucking excilent...brillent...best story ever i know it was short but it got my attention from the very first words written B.B was great and his thoughts were sarcastic and funny and so like him i loved your story keep writing

cya shellii X
CalliopeMused chapter 6 . 5/17/2005
Cute. Nice story, well played-out, and the only slightly confusing bit was the dream of Raven's-going-to-kill-you-all, which looked real for a minute. I don't know who would dare flame Canada. I'm from the US, and know the best thing about the place. You can drink at nineteen. What could ever be wrong with that?
teardrops03 chapter 6 . 5/15/2005
That was incredible. Granted, this story's been done for forever, but I read and reviewed it anyways. And I loved every bit of it. Great job!
teardrops03 chapter 5 . 5/15/2005
YOU SCARED THE CRAP OUT OF ME! But that was a great chapter.

And yay Beast Boy's awake!
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