|Reviews for Comatose: Original|
| Shadowfang14 chapter 6 . 5/5/2013
So cute! Loved it!
| Guest chapter 6 . 1/30/2013
cute story i almost ALMOST cried
| RavenDrawer chapter 6 . 1/22/2013
Aww! That was so sweet! I got sad when Raven cried on his chest. But it was great! Beautiful ending! Congratz! :)
| Guest chapter 5 . 12/2/2012
I really like how you did the dresm sequence, it fooled me completly! this was very well done. keep it up :)
| Guest chapter 6 . 8/8/2012
| Guest chapter 5 . 8/8/2012
Omg! I'm hitting my lip to keep from squealing!
This awesome! Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh ¡!
| Guest chapter 4 . 8/8/2012
this amazing u have a gift!
Btw listen to titanium its awsome
| Guest chapter 2 . 8/8/2012
This is really good!
Not 2 much fluff more REAL emotion
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/29/2012
that was so sweet i am crying or is it just sad
| NewHelm reaper chapter 6 . 7/17/2012
Great story dude. And no flames to Canada, they gave me cajun, and I'm cajun. When it got to the dream, I nearly threw my phone out the window. Good job and keep it up. Oh, the thing about the characters being ooc, they were but you made it seem that in that situation, that's how they would be. We don't really have much to work with but you made it seem as if that's how it would really play out. Here's hoping for more from you good like this.
| dcgirl chapter 2 . 2/18/2012
Thus chapter was really sweet, update soon.
| Anthony1l chapter 6 . 12/26/2011
This story is hilarious, interesting, original, touching, and unique.
| Concolor44 chapter 6 . 10/31/2011
A most satisfactory resolution. You have my thanks for sharing this story. It goes into Favorites.
| Concolor44 chapter 5 . 10/31/2011
THAT was a cruddy trick. Fortunately, you kept the 'dreadful' fairly short. Thanks for that, I guess.
I'm glad Raven was the first one in after he woke up.
| Concolor44 chapter 4 . 10/31/2011
Gahhhh! You did it again! Not that we all don't know exactly what he was going to say, but still.
Heh. Well, he certainly has a good REASON to pull through now, doesn't he?