Reviews for The Jagged Knife
JovianJeff chapter 1 . 9/16/2008
Wonderful! Thank you for the sequel. It was nice seeing Rommie's dad again. I do hope you did get around to another installment.
rankokun alpha chapter 1 . 12/13/2004
an interesting story! i am waiting for more eps to make a decision on wether to dump season 5 or keep it! not to sure yet!
L. C. Brotherton chapter 1 . 12/4/2004
Interesting concepts cause me to be patient enough to wait for more.

Just a couple of points, which I always appreciate when they are brought up in my work, and they relate to spelling and punctuation.

One: plural words do not require an 's at the end (Vedran's or Vedrans). Vedran's is a singular word implying Vedran has ownership of something. Vedrans is a plural word meaning more than one Vedran.

Two: be cautious when words sound alike, or are similar in type, but aren't the same word (break or brake. tell or tall).

I liked the mystery and originality of the fic and look forward to more of your work.
Kirei Baka Kasumi chapter 1 . 12/2/2004
O... good... you really should write the third... feel free to take your time. good instalment though!