Reviews for Best Kept Secret
Peaches chapter 4 . 8/2/2008
Hey, cunt?

If you finished this damn fic, then why are you being so fucking lazy in updating it?

It's been over a goddamn year. I'm sure your all important "modly" duties (LOL - you know how you can tell when someone has no life or value or anyone who cares about them in *real* life? When they list their "modly" duties in their "biography.") have taken you away, but if you aren't going to update, maybe you should at least do the courtesy of saying so.

LOL - I'll let you get back to your modly duties now.
Sarah chapter 2 . 8/2/2008
I'm sorry, but what was the point of the Mary Sue, exactly? It feels like you're trying VERY HARD to be clever, but it just falls on its face because a million other authors before you have done the "let's mock Mary Sue" thing. It's not very creative on your front, and has very little to do with the Newsies universe.

Unless, of course, you're mocking other writers, which isn't just unclever, but pretty damn bitchy as well. If that's the case, I suggest a boat load of growing up. Or something nice and sharp applied to the wrist, because the world would obviously be better off without a piece of shit like you in it.
Gothic Author chapter 6 . 5/5/2007
UPDATE.

...

I will repeat.

UPDATE.

And. And. THE PLOT THICKENS.

Gothic Author
hilby chapter 6 . 5/5/2007
Aw! I loveth you mah TSBboobunny!

I like this, and I-of **course**-dig Miss Mary Sue. I've never really seen Bare, so I don't understand any references, if there are any. And WOO! Sarah on drugs! Haha, isn't it just so fun getting beloved characters hyped up on illegal substances? And I just heart religion and sexuality-it's such a painful subject and always makes for wonderful plots.

AND MEDDA'S A SISTER! Hahha, how much cooler can it get? I mean, dude. You got slash, RAVES, more slash, and, DUDE, raves. *g*

...I'll leave you a better review when I'm more coherent, I swear. Final papers/vaudeville fuzz, you see.
sweets09 chapter 6 . 5/4/2007
TSB! Thank you so incredibly much for writing a Bare/Newsies crossover. It is AMAZING so far! ...and considering I have seriously fallen in love with Bare (though I never got a chance to see it when it was running :( ) this is a great thing to satisfy my craving for it! :)

Great chappy! :) I feel like I'm actually watching it as I read!

-3Sweets
Marissa chapter 6 . 5/3/2007
Ah, the plot thickens. Well done, hope to see more soon!
Rae111 chapter 5 . 4/7/2007
BareNewsies Exactly what I needed. I never realized how perfectly everyone does fit into their respective Bare roles. Thank you so much for this. Please post the rest of your story, it'd be much appreciated by all.
SnarkyBubble chapter 5 . 4/4/2007
Let's have some more of this goodness, shall we, TSB? No more holding out on us? XD! It's sincerely great, so far. The characters all fit really well. And I can hear the songs while I'm reading it. So, bring on some more!
rumor chapter 5 . 2/2/2007
Heya! Read this last week or so, but am only now dropping a line *hides* ;D

So...let's see what we have here...

Uh oh! Let Dave's confusion over MS's motives begin. lol.

HAHA! Well, she's rather droll isn't she? And just a little bitter. ;D

Interesting Race here! lol Tho I am biased and adore him in virtually all incarnations. heh. Anyway...

*deadpans* Oh how devious Tony. *snorts and laughs* XD

Oh...oh yeah interesting take on him specifying maximum dosages, etc...

With the ironic (ha!) name of Mary Sue, she has a certain something that makes the reader feel for her. Definitely both sides of the same coin in one that girl. Did that even make sense. *sigh* Oh well, anyway...ah the lovely, adoring parents. *rolls eyes* Such sweethearts. Pfft.

Great to read another of your stories hon, keep it up! XD XD
Frogger No Baka chapter 4 . 1/20/2007
SHE'S ALIVE!
Gothic Author chapter 5 . 1/18/2007
O.O 2004? And you're updating NOW? TSB! How could you!

Oh, well...

YAY, CHAPTER. It's so weird... I know what's going to happen, but I can't wait to see what you change.

Gothic Author
Oxymoronic Alliteration chapter 5 . 1/17/2007
...How do you always know when I'm on a Bare kick? Seriously, this update made my day. I'm loving it and I can't wait for the next chapter (specificall because Best Kept Secret is one of my favorite parts).
studentnumber24601 chapter 5 . 1/17/2007
Oh, Mary Sue. So emo! And yet so easy to identify with! And yet so frustrating, because she complains that she wishes she was having fun at a club right after she yelled that she didn't want to go to a club! A riddle wrapped in an enigma...with an AWESOME name.

Oh, drug dealer!Race. Will you never win? And why aren't you making out with Spot? Who wrote this fic, anyway? :D
rumor chapter 4 . 1/22/2006
Oh, last chappy. :( (for now) ;D

But, now down to it...

Uh oh...no Juliet? This could be interesting. ;D

Ooh...I'd take Queen Mab, too. XD I like both, but I think I like Mercutio just a little bit better. But I digress...

O_o Ok...Medda sure loves the drama. Hehe. XD Wow. *shakes head, grinning*

Oh god...what's he playing at? The plot thickens. O_o

Haha! And rightfully so, Race. lol

Aw...sparks are gonna be flying with Mary Sue as the Nurse and Sarah as Juliet. Eep.

Hm...what's going on with his mom here...finally suspicious? Hmm...

Oh, and we can't her ruining that hard-earned rep, now can we? lol!

It's getting good here, m'dear. Got some really nice contradictions going on, expecially with the actions of Jack and Mary Sue.

You know, it's been forever since I watched newseies and've been thinking that I really need to watch it again. Anyway, hope to see more of this soon! Look forward to it. XD
rumor chapter 3 . 1/22/2006
oh, uh oh, uh oh, uh oh...the trouble begins (while still hanging on the status quo). Wow...ok, not that we didnt' know this, but I've seriously gone crazy here. *sigh* Anyway...

HAHA! Spot and Race are roomies. I should know this from you, but...still.

Also, 3 suites for the entire basement...nice touch. ;D

Oh, just like him...soften him up to get something in return. ;D

Oh man...prom...the pack of girls...*snark* calling them the wrong names...gah. *smirk*

Haha! Plenty of time here at Pulitzer Acadamy for serious personal contemplation. XD

Ha! Ok, I'm likin' Mary Sue. Wonderfully snarky. XD

Aw...poor Dave, his dream dashed b/c he'd be unable to look at Jai every week. I'm too amused by this little self-observation of his. lol!

Hm...this pairing up should prove intersting...
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