Reviews for Conflicting Interests
layla-xd chapter 4 . 2/6/2009
Hey

okay, the last update was two years ago... but I just hope that there is a chance that youre going to write another chapter because I really really like your story!

First of all I just love the Crawford/Aya pairing. And Crawford is just so damn nice and gentle in your fanfic! I like this, and I like the idea of Crawford being Nagis father. I mean even in the original series I always thought of Crawford as of a substitute dad for Nagi... and so Im enjoying Braddy as father xD

But Aya is definitely my favourite character in your story! Hes just so sweet and vulnerable and confused and wonderful... and I think the rape through his uncle is a good explanation for his tenseness, his shyness and his sometimes quite cold behaviour...

But there are a few things that kinda confused me, first of all Ayas age. Obviously you changed it, but what about the other characters? How old are Omi, Yohji, Ken, Brad, Schu, Jei and Cahrlie supposed to be? And why is Aya upset about Omi going clubbing when Aya himself is just 18 and not allowed to enter the club?

But besides these few things your fanfic is great!

Uhm, sorry for this overlong review... I just cant keep myself from writing on and on... gomen ne! And sorry too for my grammar and spelling mistakes, Im not English...

Well, I just can hope that you keep on writing this story!

Bye,

Layla
bombayxprodigy chapter 4 . 11/9/2007
GAHHAHAHGGHGHDSAJDHFJOHEW FY BSIAJCHKAJDNISFHKSHFSHFAKH NIUYRIMJCIOWJRWRU(UMCRUR: WRITE MORE! I CAN"T WAIT FOR THE NEXT ONE WRITETE
RuByMoOn17 chapter 4 . 10/8/2006
*huggles AYA*
PrincessFlame91 chapter 3 . 2/4/2006
Hilo. I like your fic, but thought to point some things out to you...

The biggest thing is that the ending of your second and third chapter are the same...

Another thing is that it's sort of confusing when you only do au for one character. How was Nagi cut off from Schwartz, yet everything else the same? But then, that can't really be helped now, unless you decide to switch kid Nagi with an original character, and add the non-AU Nagi into your story. But then, that's a lot of work, and I, for one, know that I wouldn't try to work that out... heh heh... What a great writer I am, eh? Ya, well aside from those, I really am enjoying your fic, so keep it up!
RuByMoOn17 chapter 3 . 2/1/2006
Well done!
ranma chapter 3 . 1/28/2006
love your story, i like the third chapter but way the end is same as the second chapter

please update son don't take too long ..
tigermink chapter 3 . 1/27/2006
I am very glad that you updated this fic. I think you have something good going here. There are just a few things that don't really seem to fit though. Aya's age for one.. If he is 18 here he would have had to have been about 15 when he joined weiss and if Omi is younger then omi would have been closer to 12 when this started. You could probably get away with 20 but 18 really feels a bit off. The whole Aya and Omi being brothers threw me off for a bit but I think it works for this story. I don't know if you noticed but you have part of chapter 2 attached to the bottom of chapter 3. Other then a few miswordings you have done a very good job here and i look forward to reading more soon.
mysticblood chapter 2 . 9/22/2005
Please update. This story is very good and interesting. I would really like to see how it ends. :D
Kojima Ayumi chapter 2 . 5/3/2005
This is such a cool fic! XD Continue soon ne? Be rootin' for ya!
Shadow Sun chapter 2 . 5/2/2005
Good, complicated and interesting fic. Congratulations.
Yayoi Kaoin chapter 2 . 5/2/2005
I read this story's first chapter on MediaMiner. Of course, I was hooked instantly, and printed the chapter off to carry around in my bag all day, reading it whenever I had the chance. I was forced to throw it out, however, when I spilled coffee on it. This second chapter was very bizarre. It seemed sort as if, with all the sudden additions to the story, that you were pulling ideas out of a hat and throwing them in. It's a little confusing as the emotions don't really seem to carry over to other ones (I.E. Crawford being sweet to Aya who turns out to be 18 and later groping him in a night club when only a day or two has passed, correct me if I'm wrong). I really did not see the Farfarello and Omi pairing coming, rare as it is, and I can only wonder if Schuldig and Yohji will get togeather. Still, I'm a diehard CrawfordxAya fan and love Braddy's possesive nature when authors write it in. I'll keep reading, but I hope you could tell me (and anyone else who might be confused) why things seem a little cut and paste? Thank you. -Kaoin
Katten chapter 2 . 5/2/2005
Lurv this! Can't wait for the next update!
spiritaways chapter 1 . 1/19/2005
Ahh.. I love this... please continue
tigermink chapter 1 . 12/3/2004
Poor confused aya.. lol and getting the "talk" from Youji of all people. I was wondering are is crawfords son Nagi named after prodigy or are you going with only 3 memebers to shwartz? I hope you can update soon because i can't wait to see where this is going to go.
Katten chapter 1 . 12/3/2004
cool, I relly like it, Update soon!

And are this going to be a CxYxA I hope so
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