Reviews for Perceptions
AlmightyIshizu chapter 1 . 12/10/2004
I love the albedo fics but not many people write about him...So good job and please continue
Evangilist chapter 1 . 12/4/2004
alright, I just made the corrections, hope it's better now, thanks for your constructive criticism! )
FFfangirlH chapter 1 . 12/3/2004
Please don't give up on this story! It has so much potential. Nice idea to include Albedo's dialogue with the Kirshwasser. It's not something we see very often. The only thing I could tell you to watch out for is repetitiveness. You write AGWS a lot in the third paragraph, and it distracts from the story's great plot. Please don't think this is a flame! I'm just trying to help :).
Foibles and Fables chapter 1 . 12/3/2004
Ah, *Bows*

This is among the greatest Albedo fanfics I have ever read, keep going!

~~KOS-MOS rox9