Reviews for The World Without Me
TheStrangeNessie chapter 14 . 10/9
God the dialogue is cringe. Harry sometimes speaks like how a twelve year old would think is cool. And the death eaters speak like a cheesy 80’s cartoon villain.
Lewis James Potter chapter 19 . 9/23
With Hogsmeade being a student handout never understood why it was not under Hogwarts words in JK would. Love the story.
reason for drop chapter 2 . 8/31
stupid unlikeable mc
hanower chapter 2 . 8/31
Harry can't apparate and don't even want to know how?! The single most useful spell ever created. Yeah, no, I'm out. That is just too fucking stupid. If you had the ability to learn teleportation, would you still sit on a bus for hours on end, or wait at the airport lines for security? fuck no
Guest chapter 2 . 8/28
If he is so good at glamores perhaps he could have made himself look a little older. A teenager living on his own is guaranteed to attract attention... not to mention he will be treated like a child. Just saying. Good story.
Arumia chapter 1 . 8/27
Hmmm isn’t the snake huge? And also a person cursed into being a snake or something
LongLiveTheKing32 chapter 33 . 8/17
WELL this was an excellent read! Bloody Excellent! Loved every moment of it. Loved Dobby! This was good! I'm glad that Harry stood up for himself countless times, not just once, but mutliple times! I'm glad he put the Order and Dumbledore in their place!

I will be recommeding this story on Harry Potter Fanfictions on Facebook.
Well Done!
Guest chapter 15 . 7/2
Why not just have harry kill everyone incognito ? The whole set up is useless. Anyway, thanks for turning a promising story into something useless.
Revliledpembroke chapter 5 . 5/8
What's with this fanfic insistence that "not everything Dark is evil" when it literally is! In both Harry Potter canon and like every other fantasy story in existence.
Critical2023 chapter 4 . 5/2
ok, nevermind, dropping this quicker than a hot coal. If his scar was still there,(in his old world) Voldie was still there.(alive). talk about a screwed up plotline! geeze. bye
Critical2023 chapter 4 . 5/2
also, Voldie Strangled this World's Harry.. HOW IS THE SCAR BOTHERING HIM? IT'S NOT A CURSED SCAR IN THIS WORLD!
Critical2023 chapter 3 . 5/2
gotta love(actually Hate very much) dimensional/time travel stories where Harry has defeated voldie, which means his "whatever" in the scar is gone for good but it's returned when he winds up wherever/whenever he lands(flat on his face usually). guess writers luv it because it gives them reason to add to their word count on their stories.
the Whatever it was is Gone, so It Can't Be Returned.
moodysavage chapter 33 . 4/20
I checked for a 1 chapter sequel...there was none.
moodysavage chapter 33 . 4/20
maiqsmail chapter 9 . 4/18
I've decided to discontinue reading this. It's mediocre enough to keep going, but not good enough to enjoy the ride. Judging by the date of the writing, it gives some strong edgelord anime character vibe, Desu note, Naruto and the rest. I didn't enjoy it back then and not in the mood to try it now.
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