Reviews for The World Without Me
EmiloDfirst chapter 33 . 8/5/2020
I LOVED this story! Ahhhhh,me kokoro. I love your brain too
Dalar Rose chapter 33 . 7/31/2020
Enjoyed it very much! Thank you for writing it! And if you do ever do a sequel for this, let me/us know! Other than that, thank you again for writing this!
magicanimegurl chapter 33 . 7/26/2020
Yay, harry gets a chance at happiness after the loss. He gets a second chance in a different world. Plus new friends that are loyal. I potential slash extra chapter/story would be cool. There was already a hint in this. So imagination can run wild. Overall love this story. Write on!
Hamilton chapter 22 . 7/26/2020
Unnecessary violence... Grey wizards use violent spells when necessary and are not reluctant to kill their enemies in a fight, but they don't torture enemies for the fun of it or for revenge. Breaking Manx' wand so he cannot fight back anymore: yes, that is grey. Torturing Wormtail the way Harry did here is pure black and unworthy.
Hamilton chapter 14 . 7/25/2020
Not very realistic, that fight. It's not as if they were ambushed, they are inside Hogwarts, behind Hogwarts' wards. Even if you take into account that Dumbledore needed to protect the students, he would have put up more of a fight against a limited number of Death Eaters. And nobody except Ron notices Rookwood coming close enough to physically knock Harry out?
Hamilton chapter 6 . 7/25/2020
If Weasley and Malfoy are seventh year students (ch. 3), I doubt Cho Chang and Cedric Diggory are still at school to have breakfast at the Ravenclaw table...
SunPho3n1x chapter 32 . 7/24/2020
Such a great story! This is my second time reading it. Thank you for writing this.
Thea Lilith chapter 33 . 7/19/2020
It took me a whole day to read this while being interrupted but my main point is that this story is well planned, amazing plot, grammar, use of words and spelling and omg the feelings, I cried.

A bit. Just a bit, but yesssss thisss isss the besst book in my lissst.
Traveler301 chapter 1 . 7/14/2020
Now that is the way a prologue should be written. The story plot is laid out, and makes me want to read your story.
Guest chapter 6 . 7/13/2020
Eragon135790 chapter 2 . 7/5/2020
i hope his animagus is either a snake or a flying animal.
J. El Lions Lohn Caesar chapter 33 . 6/30/2020
Nice story and I enjoyed it thoroughly, small issue with thr speech patterns of some people like Dumbledore and Voldemort who seemed to talk very casually and out of character but it was not a big enough problem to put me off the story. Otherwise a very well written story, good luck on your future works.
Matt chapter 11 . 6/20/2020
why in the world do you insist on adding an S to the end of Mr. Ollivander's name? It just Ollivander. No S on the end. I struggle to read this story at times because your English gets very strange. It's like you write in another language and then translate it using Google Translate. It's mostly correct, but with some really weird things that don't quite make sense.
natalieeannee chapter 33 . 6/16/2020
Nice story.

I was curious when Ginny was introduced at the beginning... thinking she may have a larger part... but no? Her and Harry never connected again?

A bit interesting how Harry is all about parents!

I'm happy it all turned out well. I enjoyed how Harry formed alliances with so many different creatures (good job Nagini in decimating Voldie's force!).

The ending (introducing the large amount about vampires) seemed a little "additional". But Happy it all worked out.

Thank you for writing! This was very well written! I imagine many have enjoyed this story you share!
Guest chapter 33 . 6/11/2020

In all seriousness I really liked this story. It’s not what I typically read but it was nice. I however am wondering if Harry ever shows others his life or if Remus and Sirius are the only ones that find out. If u wanna leave it to my imagination then I respect that.

Once again great story!
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