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This was a fun and entertaining story! Your Dumbledore was sort of an awful person though. I can't imagine anyone flocking to him and following him. I guess the magical community is so small that there just wasn't anyone left to step up!

I suspect that it’s already been mentioned, but if Ron and Hermione are in 7th year, Cedric and Cho should have graduated

I’m not sure if I agree with Harry’s logic on not killing the Death Eaters here. Afterall, if he killed them both, and disposed of the bodies, who would acuse him?

Thank you.

La historia tenía un buen concepto, pero no puedo tomar en serio al Harry, quiere ser tratado como adulto pero se comporta de manera demasiado infantil, además de importarle demasiado lo que los demás piensan de él, en la teoría parece una gran historia, pero al final decepcionante.

God the dialogue is cringe. Harry sometimes speaks like how a twelve year old would think is cool. And the death eaters speak like a cheesy 80’s cartoon villain.

With Hogsmeade being a student handout never understood why it was not under Hogwarts words in JK would. Love the story.

stupid unlikeable mc

Harry can't apparate and don't even want to know how?! The single most useful spell ever created. Yeah, no, I'm out. That is just too fucking stupid. If you had the ability to learn teleportation, would you still sit on a bus for hours on end, or wait at the airport lines for security? fuck no

If he is so good at glamores perhaps he could have made himself look a little older. A teenager living on his own is guaranteed to attract attention... not to mention he will be treated like a child. Just saying. Good story.

Hmmm isn’t the snake huge? And also a person cursed into being a snake or something

WELL this was an excellent read! Bloody Excellent! Loved every moment of it. Loved Dobby! This was good! I'm glad that Harry stood up for himself countless times, not just once, but mutliple times! I'm glad he put the Order and Dumbledore in their place!

I will be recommeding this story on Harry Potter Fanfictions on Facebook.
Well Done!

Why not just have harry kill everyone incognito ? The whole set up is useless. Anyway, thanks for turning a promising story into something useless.

What's with this fanfic insistence that "not everything Dark is evil" when it literally is! In both Harry Potter canon and like every other fantasy story in existence.