Reviews for The Telltale Head Scratch
Yuna Of Besaid chapter 1 . 3/10/2011
Just had to say how much i loved this. I can really imagine 'Lai getting up to punch him in the face
whatnamebutnoname chapter 1 . 2/10/2011
Nope, I'm not. Wishing I had listened to your warning, I mean. I actually like it, a lot. It's funny but not crack; maybe pointless but not in a bad way. Just... great in a not overly amazing way. I mean, (feeling like Gippal now, confused) it's like peering into a normal day in the life of Gippal and Baralai. Like, love, will go on to read other fic.
DarkenedPetals chapter 1 . 6/17/2009
That was so funny! Loved it!
ffgurl chapter 1 . 5/20/2009
I really like this piece of writing.. .

You write well, so don't think otherwise. Keep on writing more Gippalai stuff! :x

I want to read more of your writing! Haha.. :x

I like how this ended as well - open-ended, and kinda leaves one a good way..
Mazzie May chapter 1 . 8/19/2007
I've read this a few times. Weird that I haven't reviewed. Whatev.

Ptreflies up the butt. S'all I gotta say.

Wif over and out *favs*
scarlettHuntress chapter 1 . 4/11/2006
Cute an fluffy! i like!
Gysecune chapter 1 . 8/22/2005
"Not there, thanks." LMAO. I love that. This has way too many quotable lines to list them all here, but just now that there are a lot. You slip from humor to seriousness and back again fluidly, and I can hear their voices so easily. Wonderful stuff. :D
Morrigain chapter 1 . 6/14/2005
Very nice ficcy. I like this alot, even though it wasn't the slashy-est yet. I can see how it could be though. : )
Vampy Sparda chapter 1 . 12/6/2004
Whoa. Just awesome.

I haven't even finished the game and I already know you got their personalities down pat.

I love the end too, very, very nice. Hope to see an update very soon!

-ChaoticChicken (CC)
Samurai Bishie Queen chapter 1 . 12/6/2004
SBQ: *SQUEES* I love B&G! And you wrote hat so well.

Gippal: Wow most people fin dit hard to keep us in character, but you did a fine job!

Baralai: Except Gippal is more perverted!

Gippal: B!

SBQ: I loved the interaction between the two and reading it was like reading a piece of fine literature except far more amusing. Trust Gippal to ask a question like that! I hope you write more B&G.
The RyRy chapter 1 . 12/5/2004
Aww, I really liked this! Usually a long line of dialogue with no indicator of who is speaking can get confusing, but you have both of their voices mastered. And the tell-tale head scratch is such a Gippal thing, so perfectly him - and so is Baralai's analysis of it.

The only complaint I have is that your third person camera seems situated over Baralai for this entire fic, except for when it abruptly switches to Gippal right after Baralai didn't answer Gippal's initial question. It makes that one little section seem a little jumpy.

But overall, I really really liked this. Thank you for sharing it!
Ikonopeiston chapter 1 . 12/5/2004
What a surprising delight! This is really good, a pearl in the dungheap of most of the stuff posted here. I do thank you for restoring my faith in fanfic writers. One more insipid HS fic and I would have been off to emulate Nooj.

You have the boys down pat. I haven't a single problem with this work. Bravo, or Brava - as the case may be.