Bruh, did you really just kill him or did I misinterpret?

The description of his expression and feeling ("he gave off the feeling of a blown-out candle") - that was more breath-taking than most descriptions I read in published books.

This fanfic is amazing insight into the minds and lives of Hogwarts characters while telling the story of Edward Elric's plight, and you write it in such a beautiful way. I love it.

-Dante

OooooooooooooOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
I can't wait to read endless thoughts!
This was absolutely amazing and I was so sad there wasn't more!
But there is a sequel and I'm so glad!
This is so well written and I can feel all the emotions!other most painful part was when he said that he wanted to go home!
I absolutely love it!
One of my favourite stories of all time!

I have never read Harry potter, but I'm reading this anyways. I actually liked this and my biggest compliement for this is: proper german. As a german Person myself, I am delighted to see proper grammar and spelling in an English Story.

Nice!

I loved this! I like the reactions and thoughts fics. At first is as confused, but then I knew that this was based on the 2003 aniem which differs a lot from the manga.

Wait...did he DIE?!

The fire and candle metaphor was great. I almost missed it, it was that subtle. Very nice writing

Ed as a librarian? Oh, what would I give to be a Hogwarts' student right now...

Short and sweet I liked how you used viewpoints from so many different characters

Does he success?! Please said something! D':

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Tch! No Neville or Luna or even Draco! Too bad...

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But anyway... I'm had some fun reading this..! ;)
Great and Nice! How they picture him was good!

OH DAER.
Um...What was the caption?

I am very surprised that i losst my interest.
Sure your story is explaining alot, but its taking quite a while to get to the whole point so im just going to bail. }:(

I like how you changed the metaphore.

Still loving it! ;)