|Reviews for Shards of Darkness|
| it's a riot chapter 2 . 9/20/2007
Don't listen to a thing "Veil of Winter" has to say. This is utterly brilliant. I love the discription, however, your narrative voice for Severus wasn't exactly how I pictured it. But that is all subjective to the author's preferences, and since it's your story, it should be your Severus speaking.
Another part I adored was the ending. It was so tragic and so perfect because you could totally see something like that happening. And it wasn't even within Severus' own control to read the letter or throw it away... That letter could have changed everything (at least, that's what I got from the inflection).
So all in all, great story!
| Sarah chapter 2 . 8/7/2007
More of this, please :)
And people who say that nobody cares about Snapes memories or dreams are bunch or assholes.
| Herr Morgoth chapter 1 . 1/13/2005
I like it. I'd like to read more, if you please.
| Veil of Winter chapter 2 . 12/31/2004
This has no plot... no sense of direction. The description was good and well-thought-out, but this is all really pointless. Who cares about Snape's memories or dreams? Next time you try to write something, at least use your brain.