Reviews for Black Kisses
boohoo chapter 13 . 4/28/2005
update soon!
Bluesnowman chapter 13 . 4/28/2005
love it
Zoroz chapter 13 . 4/28/2005
yay finally an update, ive been waiting frickin ages for another chapter, hope you bring more out soon...im wondering which hufflepuffs bed hes going to be in tonight :P~
john chapter 13 . 4/28/2005
For a while I thought you weren't going to update! I was so happy when you did! I loved it, and I can't wait for more!

UPDATE ASAP!
Dragon Sword Master chapter 13 . 4/27/2005
OK cool.

Just as long as Harry gets a lot of girls into bed. Is Harry ever going to do Christine?
Paktak chapter 13 . 4/27/2005
Will Hermione get worse or better as things go along? I read some of the other reviews, I don't see what they're getting confused about with the name thing. I couldn't out if it was Harry or Voldemort a few times, but that's what it's supposed to be like.

Oh well, I hope you'll be updating again soon.

Tak
e chapter 13 . 4/27/2005
go on
alen chapter 13 . 4/27/2005
I find your story very intressting, and i absolutly love your "political" plot. Not that i mind the sex.. ).

Keep up the good work, and maybe update a bit more often?
Silverscale chapter 13 . 4/27/2005
*stares at the chapter* I am greatly confused
midnight.musings chapter 13 . 4/27/2005
Did I miss something, or maybe the find and replace went alittle wonkie. Harry talking to Harry? I think at least one of the Harry's is Blaise...maybe here or there a Harry is Ron too?
KEmperor chapter 13 . 4/27/2005
You appear to have multiple people named Harry in this chapter.
destiny-nova chapter 13 . 4/27/2005
did u used find and replace name or something? cuz it look like you have a LOTS of miss naming of the character..
LIMAR chapter 12 . 3/30/2005
WHEN WILL YOU BE UPDATING
timydamonkey chapter 12 . 3/28/2005
Interesting. I can see Hermione's point of view on the slave thing; it's a complete parallel to house elves. It's very good that you remembered that she wouldn't be tolerant of that sort of thing. Also, I liked the way that Ron sided with Hermione only because of Ginny's confession. Of course, Ron's loyal to both of his friends, so he would have problems, but it seems like what Ginny said just made him snap.

It's a bit confusing at times, because this uses loads of a sort of dramatic irony. You know what's being happening to Harry over the period that he can't remember, but he has no idea. Sometimes it just makes me feel like yelling at the screen!

Nice end of that chapter. Harry's expressing his rage and actually thinking logically about how it could be happening. Is Ron completely convinced that Harry's being so bad, though? It does make me wonder, because he only agreed with Hermione after Ginny told him about being a lesbian. Is he angry at Harry just to spite Ginny, because he agreed with her? Or is it that he genuinely doesn't like the idea of Harry having a slave, despite the fact that Harry claims that his having a slave isn't his fault?

It does make me wonder.

It's nice that Ginny's view is expressed (and Blaise's for that matter, after what Dumbledore said. Does Harry remember anything about Blaise that happened during the time where he can only remember flashes? Can he remember any flahses about Blaise?). Luna's would be interesting, as it isn't really specified when she's mentioned. It doesn't say that she's been ignoring him, but it doesn't say that she hasn't either (at least, I don't think it does. My memory really sucks).

Wow, long review there. O.o Anyway, this is a very interesting fic with a very interesting idea. I like the Harry/Bellatrix pairing, and this is going slowly enough to... justify it (for want of a better word). It's not really established yet, but the way that he's even got to LIKE Bella is very interesting and not to mention original. I've never read anything like this before. Great job!

You're a very good writer! :)

-Chloe/timydamonkey
SeikoTuNeR chapter 11 . 3/27/2005
I still think this is really great.. Hope you update soon.
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