Reviews for Black Kisses |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Lol. I love it! Incubus!Harry stories are always fun, much more than Veela!Harry or Siren!Harry. I love when Harry is a creature that relies on sex/lust/love in order to gain power(well...depending on how people adapt the whole Incubus thing, some make it so his magicks become powerful after mating, others don't.) I hope you update soon now D: It's so good! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Two points of criticism for this chapter, meant constructively. First, you used 'sighted' and 'sighting' where the homophones 'cited' and 'citing' were clearly meant. (citing means to quote something, or refer to it, such as the Stainer treaty, in this instance) Site refers to a location, just to complete the homophone trio of sight-cite-site. Second, unless Hermione's married a man named Granger and it hasn't been mentioned so far in the fic, where you've called her Mrs. Granger, it should be 'Miss Granger'. An interesting take on the scar-connection reaching both ways, so far. |
![]() ![]() ![]() omg, shame you stopped it :) good anyhow thou |
![]() ![]() ![]() well for some odd reason this story caught my attention even though it is far from beeing a bella harry fic so far but hey gotta build up to the thing :) i also noticed how harry seems to loose it but still keep in touch with what he does but damn this story is quite demanding to keep up but it is worth the read :P anyways just glad to see someone touching into types of situations where harry isn't allways in control i like the change :) keep it up i'll make sure to read on Reapers |
![]() ![]() ![]() good story but slow progress in the plot |
![]() ![]() ![]() so wat is harry and does he make the others better and be with christine |
![]() ![]() ![]() now, is cho fleeing because she sees her crush *incert apropiate thing a lustful young man might do* a blissful girl? or because there is a dried up corpse next to a blisful harry? (as the magic drain he appears to make has emptied her completely) or su having made a statue in his glory? (showing his full glory) if we do not have an update, we may never know. so please update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I dont know what happened but this story is just too good to leave unfinished. So far its great and i love it all, i was wondering what happened? Did u move it or something? I dont mind waiting at all its just it would be nice to know if you are going to continue or not. Ok then well great story i hope that you continue and if not at least say so, not knowing is just agonizing. c ya |
![]() ![]() ![]() great story can't wait to find out what happens next please update as soon as you can thanks for writiing a great story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yep. Knew it would fail. More please. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a very original story plot..well done...I see that it has been almost 3 years since you last updated. Are you going to continue it or have you abandoned it? :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Damn, this is a good story! I just sat down and read the entire story! I really, REALLY hope you keep this going. This story is refreshing, it doesn't use any of the other common factors or theories. It's fresh and new, I LOVE IT! Please continue! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story but you should update since its been a year or something like that. If nothing else let us know you aren't finishing the story please. Thanks. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So lets get this straight Harry has Hannah, Susan, Su, christine and this is a Harry Bella pairing. He certainly get around doesnt he? So Im wondering are you gonna update this? Its labeled as WiP but I just wanna make sure. Dont wanna get my hopes up that their would be new chapters of this. I really like how this last chapter was the longest one. Saving the best for last? Well maybe Ill come check out the Yahoo group. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This one is definately different. Not sure hwo Harry might defeat Voldemort or anything, but the power is somwehat new and interesting. |