Reviews for Black Kisses |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Sounds great! Cant wait to read more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great Start to a highly anticipated challenge (for me anyway) that has been issued by jon3776. I have always been a fan of pairings that are not commonly known and pairings where Harry ends up with an older woman and the challenge that jon3776 issued (Black Kisses among others) was something that tickled my imagination with its endless possibilities. Though I have the ideas I must admit that I am a horrible writer and could not successfully pull off the feat of writing something enjoyable. But you my dear author has perfectly done what I have imagined in a satisfying way and if this story is half as good as Narcotic Effects then rest assured that I shall be keeping a close eye on this story and its progress. Until the next chapter, Frank Cadena |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great start! I loved your last story, and im sure this ones gonna be just as great! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a pretty good story, in fact if you wanted to you could probably turn this into a chaptered fic instead of a one shot. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This raises the question if Voldy knows Harry is watching. Is it deliberate or accidental? We'll find out, I guess. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey, this chapter's pretty good. I personally like the Harry/Bellatrix pairing and you've got a pretty good start on it. I'll be looking forward to future chapters! |
![]() ![]() ![]() An excellent begining to my challenge story. I like what you have so far with the exception of Tonks. She seemed a little off to me in this begining and the leaving of Harry tied up the whole night seemed overly cruel. On the other hand she could have inherited her aunts sex proclivities so there you go :) Anyway an awesome begining. Write faster and post often. can't wait to see where you take the story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey good job... keep writing, i like how you started... i might write my own, you've inspired me... anyways great job, but KEEP WRITING and good luck! |
![]() ![]() Really excellent, as usual. And I'm so glad you've made it *tasteful*, what with that set of challenges lending itself so easily to pr0n. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting. Harry enoying being with Bella... a unique idea... never thought I'd be interested in such a ship... curious as to where this voyage goes. 'Mione |