Reviews for Pretty Boy
You can run but you can't hide chapter 1 . 1/8/2009
Please update!
Katrina Anna Marie Hescott chapter 1 . 5/28/2006
I like this fic Its really good I hope you finish it!

Im gonna add it to my favorites!
The Wicked Witch of Dingl chapter 1 . 2/16/2006
Interesting... Next chapter: The one that's going through a 'stage' right?

Update!
SlippingSanity chapter 1 . 1/30/2006
Great Fanfic so far! I hope that you update it soon!
Brooklyn'sGurl chapter 1 . 12/12/2005
I know you haven't updated for a long, long time, but could you please think about it? I'm dying to know how this story goes!
kitty chapter 1 . 12/11/2005
i really like this story so far it's original and i can't wait for your next update.
Babybluekitten chapter 1 . 10/26/2005
When are you going to update?Oh I hope it soon, please please update soon!It's really good
Wolfchilde chapter 1 . 9/10/2005
This looks like it's going to get interesting, very cool beginning! I love the way you write, there's almost a subtle poetic feeling about it. Anywayz, please update soon!

-Wolfchilde-
lessa4 chapter 1 . 5/22/2005
Ah, but the odd insanities make for the more interesting bits, yes? Very interested in seeing the rest of this.
SolitaireAikanaro chapter 1 . 4/19/2005
Oh. My. . God. That was one of the best things I've ever read! You're now one of my main Beyblade authors! The only other one is Kerrie-chan. Please update! I adore the way you made Brooklyn and Tala! But I always though Brooklyn's last name was Kingston...

Love this! Update!
Nephra chapter 1 . 4/14/2005
Luffs dis! Your fics so great! Ya gotta update it soon, would ya? :x

See ya!
Nazen chapter 1 . 3/25/2005
Wai! *tackles* x3

I LOVE how you portrayed their personalities. Especially Brooklyn - he seemed so...well...Brooklyn-ish. xD

Excellent story - but I just have one question. Is Brooklyn's last name really Hart? They never mention it in the dubbed version, but I don't know about in the Japanese. o.o

Hart...*snorts with laughter*
Chiikie chapter 1 . 1/13/2005
Hehehehe, i like i like i like! u have ta update!
Ramen II chapter 1 . 12/28/2004
brilliant! that what i think of this story so far, i'm really not kidding when i say i was giggiling throughout this

you made all the character sound so sexy! i mean even though max is damn fine its not often you get to see the 'obviously-not-innocent' side of him and am i detecting a bit of max/kai here? yay

go brooklyn/tala - they are so cute together

i think its good you've made this story realistic with all the insanity and that cool 'points' system because it gets annoying when time after time the characters are written as perfect and wonderfull (I happen to do that tho -.-) insanity rules .

so keeping an eyes on this story - update soon!

russle
Jade Cyclone chapter 1 . 12/27/2004
Oh my GAWD. I love you. This is such a great story, and you have amazing talant as a writer! Great job! You keep everyone on there toes, and you have just the right amounts of dramatic moments, and the fact that you can keep it realistic is such a great achievement. This isn't corny or cliche at all, and that is something that is going to take this story to an entirely new level. I can't wait to see what you have in store for this! Brilliant job, dear

Angelgirl
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