Reviews for The unexpected visitor
Strawberry Eggs chapter 1 . 9/19/2005
Zelos, afraid of mice? XD LOL! I'd never think he would be!

Soemthing ther than romance or friendship, just sillyness! Still cute
Ilvinaeda chapter 1 . 2/22/2005
Man, how the mighty have fallen...poor guy getting scared out of his wits like an elephant... :P

Anyhow, this was another wonderful one. I'm thinking he should get out more and live...

(And on a strange does this guy make in the wilds? Mr. Wilder doesn't exactly strike me as the outdoors type...hehe. And being scared of a rodent...Sheena might keep one as a pet. \_/)

Wonderful fic. And off to the next I go...
June chapter 1 . 12/13/2004
Aww...mice! *squeal* Ccutee...

I just love your little fics; screw whoever says they suck!
Story Weaver1 chapter 1 . 12/9/2004
so fuuny, I got the warm fuzzies. I can just imagine Zelosscreaming like a girl while Shenna and Colette coo over the mouse.
Rose-Wisteria chapter 1 . 12/7/2004
I really enjoyed this one-shot, it made me laugh out loud many times especially because of Zelos. Hehe, us females are strong! I will reply to your e-mail soon, as soon as I get every tests out of the way and get me e-mail working for tomorrow. Hehe, I just love this one-shot, it's just so funny. Nice job.
Dan the Echidna chapter 1 . 12/7/2004
I can see this whole thing happening... Y'know, except the times where it seems that they kinda get gay. *I have a twisted mind and sometimes tend to get things mixed up, so some of it seemed like they were a little on the gay side to me.* Anyway, good story, yadda yadda, one of my favorites, blah blah, I need a smoke, bye.~Sen PS: Don't take the ending of my reveiw bad, I just havn't had a smoke in a few weeks...
That sucked chapter 1 . 12/7/2004
Ya know... that was really a crappy story
NakigoeMizuKibun chapter 1 . 12/7/2004
I love this so much! I think it's the best! Keep up the writing, it's great!
Urby chapter 1 . 12/6/2004
When they were talking about "The Thing", I instantly thought "rodent-squirrel-mabob", but mouse works, and yes, they are cute.

I currently have a cat that is deathly afraid of mice, and whaddayaknow, his name is Zelos.

Pink-haired men afraid of mice-it can only come from Samuu!
Skyraptor66 chapter 1 . 12/6/2004
A mouse! Just like Mote!(In case you are wondering, Mote's a really cute ship rat from the book Animist) I love mice! My mom hates 'em though. I also like snakes too so, um, yeah. Zelos apparently hates them too. (smirks evilly)