Reviews for Girl Trouble
christianqueenofegypt chapter 1 . 11/11/2007
Keep it! Only thing you need to change is Seto/Serenity 2 Ryou/Serenity! :)
Battler chapter 1 . 10/6/2005
Keep it up I like it
Spaz913 chapter 1 . 3/10/2005
Sweet! I loved it! The grammar could use some work, but other than that, it's great! - Nice job here.

FF-KH-AnimeFREAK chapter 1 . 1/28/2005
Cuteness! Moki is so cute! that was hilarious how ya made his nose bleed like that! Plz continue _ Its pretty good!
necro fan chapter 1 . 12/7/2004
keep it keep it keep it

it is very good

not that funny though

more romance than humor

o well

good story
nkitty29 chapter 1 . 12/7/2004
kitty:there were a few errors but great. i can't believe that rebecca is going out with yugi.

serenity: - you are soo stupid you read yugi and rebecca stories that lita(penpal)writes

kitty: yeah your right. okay please update soon poor mokuba
Sakura chapter 1 . 12/7/2004
Update soon! _
MutedFaith chapter 1 . 12/7/2004
that story was hilarious.

i haven't read something like that since a story i read called "The Leather Pants Incident"

where Bakura wore these blue leather pants with black leopard strips. it was so funny. i can't remember where i read it.

i always forget things

this story won't be one of those things.

P.S: Continue writing these stories.

you got a real talent there (a funny talent) lol
Simply Brooke chapter 1 . 12/7/2004
I liked this story a lot a couple spelling errors but other then that this story was awesome! And I do think you should continue it's really good! I want to know what happens next!

Riana Salvatore chapter 1 . 12/7/2004
I like it. I'm a little confused why Rebecca would be at Mokuba's school because she is in college but good story
Petit Angel chapter 1 . 12/7/2004
Update asap! I enjoyed it.