Reviews for The Betrayal of the Light
Anonymous chapter 18 . 7/7/2023
I'm honestly finding it difficult to figure out why I reacted to Harry using AK more than killing a ton of people in dragon form. I have no clue what was going through my head when I read that. It didn't help that I had to turn off my laptop the literal second I read 'Avada Kedavra'
Wheatley9001 chapter 21 . 7/3/2023
You tease us on the next chapter and 18 years later we have neither the chapter or a discontinuation update... Some people have waited longer for this than gamers have waited for Half-Life 3...
Ozymandias chapter 5 . 6/20/2023
Hi sorry to moan but just saying it's extremely rare for British homes to have AC, especially in the 90s. Our houses are built to keep heat in, and I can't ever remember going in to someones house, even if they're filthy rich, that has AC.
Nightwing2013 chapter 21 . 2/26/2023
Aw man! This chapter is old enough to smoke in the States, and we never met Katherine! I absolutely love it, though!
Mewpagano chapter 21 . 10/25/2022
extremely good but not finished
raven haired girl chapter 10 . 9/24/2022
this story is very much like TAKING CONTROL fanfic of hp
mumphie chapter 21 . 10/27/2021
ah, 'tis a shame that real life conquered your story! It's a wonderful plot. I'm so sad that we won't see a resolution to it. Perhaps someday a niggle will worm its way into your consciousness and you will come back! Sigh. I know, it's been nearly two decades. But, It was good!
mumphie chapter 18 . 10/27/2021
He actually was pretty dumb to use AK. Too merciful. With wandless he could have made the inside on the outside and voila! No more Malfoy.
RoyaleGaming1 chapter 10 . 5/22/2021
You seriously need to stop replying to comments on the story it’s off putting and inflated the word count. I find it most annoying since often reading comments leads to spoilers, this means that I either don’t have a clue what your responding to or you risk spoiling something yourself. I noticed you haven’t updated this in a while but if you see this take on board what I say please
WinkingSkeever chapter 21 . 5/7/2021
I wish this was finished
Miss Millie chapter 18 . 9/4/2020
Hello,
I think I've read one story that Harry's army used guns to fight the Death Eaters! One they don't have to get very close to the wizards with a gun. Pleassssssssssse continue to write this story! It is sooooooooooo good!
SilverMidas chapter 21 . 7/28/2020
loving this story
COME ON chapter 21 . 6/28/2020
PLS PLS PLS WRITE IM BEGGING U PLS!. By the way i wrote the kinda threat AND I WILL CARRY IT OUT
y chapter 21 . 5/14/2020
the next chapter doesnt exist what happened to this wonderful series. Everytime i find a decent story the author just disapears and it just ends.
american chapter 8 . 5/14/2020
AMERICA IS THE BEST (though i wish we had tea time, i would like a break from work) BUT STILL AMERICA IS THE BEST
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