NICE! ADD MORE PLEASE! I LOVE IT!

Very nice!

Late to the party but I loved this. Well written that had me smirking at parts!

sigh.
It's a pitty that there aren't more G.I. Jane fanfiction. Really, it is. I fucking LOVE that movie. About know it word by word. AND I always thought that her sleazy-and-clean boytoy was just an in-between before she took all that hate over that fiiiine fine line and jumped between the sheets with the Master Chief.
Loved this one, even if there was no smut for poor deprived me.

What? No more? Would love to read more mushy Master Chief stuff! :)

This was really good. Everyone kept in character. A nice little idea of O'Neil and Urgayle. Always wondered how that might go ;-) This particular scenario worked out pretty good.

I know it's an old fic, but I can't help wondering what might have happened next :-)

Uh, please write more! Or a new G.I. Jane story ? :D

G.I. Jane is one of my all time fave movies and I was delighted to find this fic, since I am a Jordan/Jack supporter in every ways possible. Can't stand Royce at all. He may be a sweet guy, but he is too sweet and mild mannered in general for Jordan. Especially after she completed her SEAL training.

Anyway, this was such a wonderful fic, filled with their sparring and kiss(es). *Faves it*

Oh I loved it :D

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I just saw the movie like fifteen minutes ago and am so happy that there is a Jack/Jordan fic! Please continue! It is like totally in character!

Very good job. Would like to see this story continued post-haste. One note. If he was flying on a Navy bird, it would be crewed by Navy personnel. 'Private' is the lowest form of Marine or Army personnel. :) Good job.

THAT WAS SO GREAT! I love that movie! I thought they should have ended up together. I LOVE THIS STORY! and I want the world to hear! THE PERSON WHO WROTE THIS STORY IS A FREAKIN GENIUS!