Dear captiankodak1

Nice little fanfic. Though not one of my favorites, it was still a nice read; you did a good job on Mrs Stoppable's thought process. The story has depth. I am not a Jew, but it was profound how you Mrs Stoppable makes a big deal about her family's beliefs. I am a Christian, and I admire sincerity in another person's beliefs (even non-christions); as long as their sincerity doesn't involves terrorism.

The wholesome standards are totally high. Nothing offensive.

I hope this review has a good influence on you. God bless.

Data Seeker

I think you captured the real Mrs Stoppable, she seemed like most of the Jewish mothers I've met. It occurred to me that Shelia Gogh, aka Shego, could be Jewish, the last name Gogh, possibly so. Perhaps if Ron were to bring Shego home to mother, then Kimmie wouldn't look the wrong choice for Ron.

Nice one, I really liked what you did for her and the kind of personality you gave her. What the parents are like are often reflected on the children before their teenage years.

Ron is pretty much unchanged through the years so it is reasonable to assume that they're good, attentive and loving parents as well. :)

Keep up the good work.

I think you did a good job on Mrs. S. It would be harder to write for her and Mr. S, but you did great!

I like! I love stuff like this.

Grat story, keep up the good work!

I like the series a lot. You've managed to make each character sound authentic. Each one seems have a different 'voice.'

This was good, I hope to see another fanfic real soon.