|Reviews for When A Lioness Fights|
| Tonks7777777 chapter 1 . 9/15
Sooo good! And ive never read a story like this! Thank you!
| Caramel4me chapter 80 . 7/21
I came across your work a few years ago and read most of them at that time, I just came across it again and have started my run through of all of your works once more! A job well done once again! Thank you for sharing.
| Ananomalie chapter 78 . 7/16
Hi Kayly. This is my favorite fanfiction I’ve ever read. I think about it all the time, and I’ve probably read it ten or fifteen times. You’re a master of writing psychologically realistic characters, of capturing atmosphere and emotionromance, melancholy, hope, pain, longing, peace, love. Your characterization particularly of Harry, Hermione, Snape, and Draco is truly an extraordinary accomplishment. Thank you for bringing this story to life. Reading it has been a port in the storm for me for many years, and i look forward to returning to this story for many years to come. Thank you.
| clarelissy chapter 78 . 6/12
Thank you! I loved to see this story and your writing evolve!
| liz.onia chapter 80 . 6/11
Wow, this story was absolutely amazing! Thanks so much for sharing it. Hope you're doing well!
| HMRoberts chapter 80 . 6/4
I don't know why I've never come across this work before. I am thankful, however, to have done so now.
I have said this to a few other authors of these fan-fics but I need you to understand that even if the words are the same, my intent is not.
To be drawn in, captivated and held in thrall to the sheer brilliance of the written word is a pleasure I've known since I first learned to read as a 3yr old, more than fifty years ago. Notable, venerable and hoary-aged tomes; filled with the struggles and triumphs of imagined or real persons; run alongside the brilliantly newest of works. Fiction or non-, I treasure the word.
This story is now amongst a crystalline and shimmering few that will grace my mind forever.
I won't wax loquacious at great length. You already know what you wrought. My words on style, grammer, plot, characterization, story-arc, etc. are moot in the fact of a completed work.
ALL of that said...
Thank you for writing and sharing this tale.
Your (satisfied!) Constant Reader;
| MoonfaerieGalena80 chapter 80 . 4/18
This story is everything. You wrote them beautifully.
| soulcleaver13 chapter 58 . 4/18
This is so good. Thank you so much. You are talented to create a this certain dark atmosphere I love.
| Fluteabec chapter 80 . 4/15
This fanfiction us the best of the best. You are an amazing writer. I would love to read more about their aventure. Anyway thank you for writing this one. It's better as the real HP story for me
| ehskdks chapter 1 . 4/6
the way u wrote the paragraph is awful
| jada951 chapter 78 . 3/23
What an amazing, intricately woven dark tale.
I see it took years to write, and that is totally understandable.
Your working of the friendships, mind-palaces, allies and enemies, all wonderfully crafted.
It took me a few days to get thru it, w/ many a long night reading thru chapter after chapter.
I don't know that there are any visible flaws (besides a few mis-spells and everybody makes those.) A really tight storyline. I'm sure glad I didn't have to wait for chapters all those years ago, it would have driven me nuts.
How cool it must feel to know that your writing is touching readers a dozen or so years after the writing of it.
| jada951 chapter 43 . 3/22
I know it's been a long time since you wrote this, but I have never come across it before. So glad I did.
Great way to handle to order, to get Draco in, additionally, the encounter w/ Fudge was masterfully done!
| TinyDragonPix chapter 8 . 3/9
They should definitely get together. Really enjoying the story
| Gwendolyn Paige chapter 9 . 2/19
I am loving the story. It is wonderful. However, it throws me off that someone as smart and mature as Hermione would use the word romantical in a serious way.
| Maghy chapter 1 . 1/25
The best FF ever