Reviews for Breach In The System
coltimothy chapter 1 . 7/24/2011
dear lordy in heaven on his throne almighty that was amazing you quit its your funeral but seriously you may be sad about the ps but it sounds like your lieing because that story was amazin when rod came i was literally shaking in shear anger that i thought you were gonna leave us hanging so you continue or the giant flying spaghetti monster will come for you with his pirates
XDarkZeroX chapter 1 . 7/20/2010
I loved you are not good enough with love stories but it was good enough.

I guess now Rod needs to die after seeing them
Koji chapter 1 . 1/15/2007
:D What a nice comfortable and fun read! I'm still grinning here. _ I like your word choice and humorous narration. It brought out Mint's character really well. Hahahha, I can still see her throwing here usual fits in my mind. It kept me reading and I enjoyed your story till the end.

However, it fell hard on me sometimes to decide whether some scenes were supposed to be serious or funny (near the end). Nonetheless, I enjoyed it. Thank you for the swell story!
Pearl chapter 1 . 6/16/2006
I love this story. And I love your style! I really could not stop laughing. And it was actually in character. Man... That was just great... You should write more. Because... well... I say so? Or maybe because the cheese commands you or something crazy like that.

Anyway! Kudos to you! This is wonderful. Pearl approves. -
Yeyana Valentine chapter 1 . 12/18/2005


Yumiko-00 chapter 1 . 5/14/2005
Urg...please continue the story! Its really cute and it does not suck!
ReLiC AnGeL chapter 1 . 5/7/2005
Write more, write more, write more, write more! Update, update the story already, damnit! I beg you, PLEASE!
Sora Icefreeze chapter 1 . 2/12/2005
I can't belive.. only -5- reviewsw for this? your way of keeping everyone IC is INCREDIBLE! update soon! i beg! i BEG!
Essabell chapter 1 . 1/2/2005
This story did not suck. It was a very cutie story and I loved it. Keep up the good work.

Mint Coral
Marowe chapter 1 . 12/18/2004
DOOD! That was so good! makes me feel the fuzzies inside, mmyes XD i think a series out of you would be awesome, flat out. you are too good for a 13 year old! i'm 14 and i STILL can't write that damn good! arg, i hate you. write more, or be cRaZaE.

Rhinocio chapter 1 . 12/12/2004
WRITEMOREWRITEMOREWRITEMORE! Or I'll send my sister on you!

Belive me, I can relate to your PS. I'm 13 too.




By the way, You need to use a bit more 'He' and 'She' insted of names.
Relic-angel chapter 1 . 12/8/2004
That was too CUTE! So cute! "Do a little dance, make a little love, get down tonight!"
Fate's Company chapter 1 . 12/7/2004
aw! so cute! do more ToF fics! RuexMint!